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by Michael (MV)
21 Aug 2019, 10:47
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: "no deal is real" (celebrating a golden anniversary)
Replies: 5
Views: 246

Re: "no deal is real" (celebrating a golden anniversary)

  Thanks Siva, meena, and kenneth. Consider the lyrics (which I allude to in the beginning of the poem) by Canadian Joni Mitchell who documented the heart & soul of the iconic event with her songwriting gift: https://genius.com/Crosby-stills-nash-and-young-woodstock-lyrics ^^ Then I hope you will se...
by Michael (MV)
21 Aug 2019, 09:53
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Algernon Charles Swinburne
Replies: 8
Views: 679

Re: Algernon Charles Swinburne

  Hi Bob, I have liked this since I first read it earlier in the month, esp the sensuous movement that articulates - à la Swinbourne - the finale ^^ yet workshop suggesting "adulation" for "adoration" workshop consider for the opening: Flamingo-lean with a beak as distinct; he even boasted a catarac...
by Michael (MV)
20 Aug 2019, 07:41
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Houses
Replies: 4
Views: 181

Re: Houses

In accord with Mr. Bob

I see it on the list for IBPC


8)

Michael (MV)
by Michael (MV)
19 Aug 2019, 04:30
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: "no deal is real" (celebrating a golden anniversary)
Replies: 5
Views: 246

"no deal is real" (celebrating a golden anniversary)

We are now far from stardust We are purple hearts golden We are freed from the devil's bargain We begin again in the fold of Our Father's Woodstock Garden nurtured from a barnyard with the UniSon of voices nothing surpasses the power of sun & flower Woodstock is no big deal Woodstock is not a deal W...
by Michael (MV)
10 Aug 2019, 18:13
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: White Crow
Replies: 7
Views: 776

Re: White Crow

Hi kenneth,

I lost my workshop response

In essence. I have suggested the finale as

albinic feet protruding 
like a pink tongue, stuck-out


😎

Michael (MV)
by Michael (MV)
10 Aug 2019, 08:58
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Poems that placed in the June IBPC 2019:
Replies: 0
Views: 111

Poems that placed in the June IBPC 2019:

 
Congrats to our fellow IBPC poets whose poems placed.


June 2019 IBPC poems selected by Melissa Studdard with commentary:

http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/2019/6



Michael (MV)


 
 
 
  
by Michael (MV)
09 Aug 2019, 05:49
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming August IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 832

3 Poems have been sent (re Upcoming August IBPC 2019)

 
Good luck in the finals

Billy

Meena

and Bob


A wonderful weekend to every one

8)

Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 
 
 
by Michael (MV)
06 Aug 2019, 21:25
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming August IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 832

Re: Update re Upcoming August IBPC 2019:

Needing a response from Billy and Meenas

ASAP

Thanks

Michael (MV)

Michael (MV) wrote:
04 Aug 2019, 21:40
Our 3, as I read it -

Bob's Last Game of the Season

Billy's It'll Grow Back

Meenas' Kadaneri Ayyanar


Michael (MV)
by Michael (MV)
04 Aug 2019, 21:40
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming August IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 832

Update re Upcoming August IBPC 2019:

Our 3, as I read it -

Bob's Last Game of the Season

Billy's It'll Grow Back

Meenas' Kadaneri Ayyanar


Michael (MV)
by Michael (MV)
02 Aug 2019, 08:19
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming August IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 832

Re: Upcoming August IBPC 2019:

I 2nd Bob's Last Game of the Season

I 2nd Billy's It'll Grow Back

Michael (MV)
by Michael (MV)
31 Jul 2019, 12:57
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Last Game of the Season
Replies: 11
Views: 1267

Re: Last Game of the Season

Hi Bob, consider w/out the the unneeded phrase "a waste of time." Yes, I relate to your memoir poem. Ironically so in that I looked forward to the ball park & stadium for the music concerts, not the games. By analogy, the experience is familiar, through to the wonderful grand slam-finale 8) Michael ...
by Michael (MV)
28 Jul 2019, 02:48
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming August IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 832

Upcoming August IBPC 2019:

  Voice your recommendation(s) here, and Please let us know ASAP if you are not going to be available to represent the Writer's Block - then we will know not to consider your poems further for this month's IBPC. I/we will be looking for consensus - in keeping with a communal workshop environment Whi...
by Michael (MV)
21 Jul 2019, 16:35
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Partnering
Replies: 7
Views: 864

Re: Mating Flamingos

A joy to read this Sunday morning Personification is usually outmoded for contemporary poetry, yet your poem reads that it is not outlawed. I believe that is an extension of your mastery of the persona-poem. more discovery for reader if "flamingos" is not already stated in the title, which I'm sugge...
by Michael (MV)
04 Jul 2019, 18:02
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Update on the 4th Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

Thanks kenneth for the 3rd.

been a while - jazzed to represent WB

the 3rd on the 4th
Let the sun shine

😎

Michael

Kenneth2816 wrote:
03 Jul 2019, 09:55
Im going to third your poem Michael. IBPC has been very generous to me. I appreciate your seconding behind your own poem. Very selfless.
by Michael (MV)
04 Jul 2019, 17:53
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

Thanks, Bob

A Wonderful 4th

BobBradshaw wrote:
04 Jul 2019, 10:12
Yes, unpublished
by Michael (MV)
03 Jul 2019, 08:35
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

 
And which is to be the 3rd poem to represent the WB?

8)

Michael (MV)

 

 
 

 
by Michael (MV)
03 Jul 2019, 08:21
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

  Thanks, Siva, Good Luck in the finals 8) Michael (MV) 'Newlyweds Start Life in the House of the Groom's Parents' is my original poem and I am not representing any other board,or submitting it elsewhere.This has never been published before and my email id is --sivajkamivelliangiri@gmail.com I conse...
by Michael (MV)
03 Jul 2019, 08:18
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

  Thanks, Bob, And the poem is unpublished? Good Luck in the finals 8) Michael (MV) Thank you, Michael. The poem is original and mine, and I am only participating in the IBPC nominations on this forum. My email is bobbybradshw@yahoo.com. Bob Bradshaw ChildrenTour Monterey Bay Aquarium I dream of wav...
by Michael (MV)
03 Jul 2019, 05:37
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Update the evening of 7/2 re Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

 
Waiting to hear from Siva; her poem, as of this posting, has 3 nominations


Michael (MV)

 

 

 

 
by Michael (MV)
03 Jul 2019, 00:47
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

Thanks Kenneth, I see now that Siva's Newlyweds poem has 3 nominations. Still there is time to 2nd your Escher poem. I was hoping someone else would, then I could 3rd it. So here at this time, I am 2nding Kenneth's Escher poem, because I believe it is a IBPC contender, and, too, he has accepted the ...
by Michael (MV)
03 Jul 2019, 00:28
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: 2 for the Solar eclipse spanning South America, July 2, 2019
Replies: 2
Views: 875

2 for the Solar eclipse spanning South America, July 2, 2019

  Baily’s Beads https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baily's_beads a court 'n sparkling 'round the moon's silhouette the engagement ring leading to bands of brilliance as two become one in totality face to face https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solar_eclipse_of_July_2,_2019 2/ solar eclipse  (the honeymoon) th...
by Michael (MV)
02 Jul 2019, 22:06
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Update 7/2; re Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

 
Is it about time for some 2nd & 3rding?


Let's decide on our 3 before the fireworks

 
Thanks,

8)

Michael (MV)

 

 

 
 
 
 
 
by Michael (MV)
02 Jul 2019, 22:01
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Poems that placed in the May IBPC 2019:
Replies: 0
Views: 425

Poems that placed in the May IBPC 2019:

 
Congrats to our fellow IBPC poets whose poems placed.


May 2019 IBPC poems selected by Melissa Studdard with commentary:

http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/2019/5



Michael (MV)

 

 
   
by Michael (MV)
02 Jul 2019, 21:52
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

    I 2nd, Bob's, Children from a Burn Ward Tour Monterey Bay Aquarium, although I unconditionally workshop suggest abbreviating the title to: Children Touring Monterey Bay Aquarium or Touring Monterey Bay Aquarium ^^ the circumstances of the children are detailed in the poem. 8) Michael (MV)       ...
by Michael (MV)
02 Jul 2019, 21:28
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:
Replies: 21
Views: 1722

Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2019:

  Thanks Frank, for the initial nom-nod; and Thanks, Bob, for the 2nd. I, Michael (MV), accept the nom-nod re my "antique" poem - and even if I don't represent this time, I am honored that Frank, and Bob, find my poem an IBPC contender. Thanks again to you both 8) Michael (MV) I second Michael's "an...

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