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by Kenneth2816
05 Nov 2018, 20:35
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:
Replies: 17
Views: 738

Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:

Radium Girls Once was a question We never asked. It was a job needed doing. There was a war on. We worked at night to better see the dials and watch face,tipped camel hair to our lips to make a fine point. Painted luminescent hands and Roman numerals on altimeters tipped iron gunsights, color of old...
by Kenneth2816
03 Nov 2018, 03:42
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:
Replies: 17
Views: 738

Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:

well I accept for Radium Girls. Thank you
by Kenneth2816
02 Nov 2018, 10:53
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:
Replies: 17
Views: 738

Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:

2nd on Valerians Young Wife
by Kenneth2816
02 Nov 2018, 03:47
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Night Notes From Overwatch. revised
Replies: 8
Views: 382

Re: Night Notes From Overwatch. revised

longest I've written..thank you
by Kenneth2816
30 Oct 2018, 20:29
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Night Notes From Overwatch. revised
Replies: 8
Views: 382

Re: Night Notes From Overwatch

Frank, based only on your belief the poem has merit, I'll rework it soon.
by Kenneth2816
30 Oct 2018, 20:27
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Ghost
Replies: 7
Views: 288

Re: Ghost

Nice.
by Kenneth2816
30 Oct 2018, 20:24
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Back And Forth At Twilight
Replies: 2
Views: 182

Re: Back And Forth At Twilight

Lot of good imagery and I love the backdrop of corn fields. It has an ethereal quality, the use of stilted language ( sough, repose, etc.) makes it sound like it's from another time. I don't understand everything that's happening, but I like it very much
by Kenneth2816
30 Oct 2018, 19:15
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Night Notes From Overwatch. revised
Replies: 8
Views: 382

Re: Night Notes From Overwatch

I hear you Frank, I do.
by Kenneth2816
30 Oct 2018, 05:59
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:
Replies: 17
Views: 738

Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:

Thanks for the support Frank. I don't think Night Notes From Overwatch is anything close to IBPC material.
On that basis, I decline
by Kenneth2816
29 Oct 2018, 04:06
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Spammers Zapped
Replies: 1
Views: 157

Re: Spammers Zapped

thanks
by Kenneth2816
28 Oct 2018, 19:18
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:
Replies: 17
Views: 738

Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2018:

Bob St Remys


Dale Eugenics

2nd on Welsh Cakes
by Kenneth2816
28 Oct 2018, 09:55
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Night Notes From Overwatch. revised
Replies: 8
Views: 382

Night Notes From Overwatch. revised

They say he was ten feet tall had seven toes and fingers on each hand and foot. Judaculla "the slant eyed one " was the Cherokee god of the hunt, the harvest, and of judgement. Eight hundred years. The People populated this area until they made contact with Europeans. I feel their ghosts sometimes. ...
by Kenneth2816
27 Oct 2018, 11:50
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Eugenics (revision)
Replies: 11
Views: 469

Re: Eugenics (revision)

Thanks. Nothing I have posted this month I'm interested in
by Kenneth2816
27 Oct 2018, 03:38
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Eugenics (revision)
Replies: 11
Views: 469

Re: Eugenics (revision)

Well be sure to correct the typo on "breeding" 🎈
by Kenneth2816
26 Oct 2018, 16:17
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Eugenics (revision)
Replies: 11
Views: 469

Re: Eugenics (revision)

Dale. Like to nom this...
by Kenneth2816
26 Oct 2018, 16:16
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: a small boat
Replies: 7
Views: 401

Re: a small boat

I work on a lake. It's not small, though has many coves. This resonates with me. Ever hear of Lake Toxaway?
by Kenneth2816
16 Oct 2018, 20:03
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Sculpture
Replies: 4
Views: 217

Re: Sculpture

I like the concept. As if one is addressing unreachable parts of oneself.
by Kenneth2816
16 Oct 2018, 20:01
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: When I Find Myself
Replies: 4
Views: 211

Re: When I Find Myself

Relatable.
by Kenneth2816
14 Oct 2018, 22:52
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Eugenics (revision)
Replies: 11
Views: 469

Re: Eugenics

I'm not sure "eugenics" is really the word you're looking for here. Historically, in the US it was about forced sterilization of "undesirables.
That is how most will relate to the term.

I'll come back later to crit
by Kenneth2816
14 Oct 2018, 03:36
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Paper Death
Replies: 9
Views: 296

Re: A Paper Death

Well, I'm not tryna make a riddle, but admittedly, rough terrain.
by Kenneth2816
14 Oct 2018, 02:34
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Echocardiogram
Replies: 5
Views: 265

Re: Echocardiogram

Yeah. Nothing else makes that sound
by Kenneth2816
14 Oct 2018, 02:34
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Echocardiogram
Replies: 5
Views: 265

Re: Echocardiogram

Yeah. Nothing else makes that sound

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