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Radium Girls Once was a question We never asked. It was a job needed doing. There was a war on. We worked at night to better see the dials and watch face,tipped camel hair to our lips to make a fine point. Painted luminescent hands and Roman numerals on altimeters tipped iron gunsights, color of old...

well I accept for Radium Girls. Thank you

2nd on Valerians Young Wife

longest I've written..thank you

revised

Frank, based only on your belief the poem has merit, I'll rework it soon.

Nice.

Lot of good imagery and I love the backdrop of corn fields. It has an ethereal quality, the use of stilted language ( sough, repose, etc.) makes it sound like it's from another time. I don't understand everything that's happening, but I like it very much

I hear you Frank, I do.

Thanks for the support Frank. I don't think Night Notes From Overwatch is anything close to IBPC material.
On that basis, I decline

thanks

Bob St Remys


Dale Eugenics

2nd on Welsh Cakes

They say he was ten feet tall had seven toes and fingers on each hand and foot. Judaculla "the slant eyed one " was the Cherokee god of the hunt, the harvest, and of judgement. Eight hundred years. The People populated this area until they made contact with Europeans. I feel their ghosts sometimes. ...

Thanks. Nothing I have posted this month I'm interested in

Well be sure to correct the typo on "breeding"

Dale. Like to nom this...

I work on a lake. It's not small, though has many coves. This resonates with me. Ever hear of Lake Toxaway?

Nailed it. One of my IBPC picks

I like the concept. As if one is addressing unreachable parts of oneself.

Relatable.

I'm not sure "eugenics" is really the word you're looking for here. Historically, in the US it was about forced sterilization of "undesirables.
That is how most will relate to the term.

I'll come back later to crit

Well, I'm not tryna make a riddle, but admittedly, rough terrain.

Good

Yeah. Nothing else makes that sound

Yeah. Nothing else makes that sound