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by meenas17
16 Oct 2019, 17:07
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Wild Ponies
Replies: 10
Views: 179

Re: Wild Ponies

The poem runs smooth till the last stanza,
I feel the one has an excess of sensuous references.
Contain them or substitute with a pleasant imagery.
by meenas17
16 Oct 2019, 16:59
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Neighbor
Replies: 10
Views: 181

Re: The Neighbor

it is a sensitive poem. Good but could be improved with some images.Much is left to the reader's imagination.
by meenas17
14 Oct 2019, 17:50
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Emily Dickinson, Marry Me
Replies: 7
Views: 500

Re: Emily Dickinson, Marry Me

Which one to choose? I really do not know.
Is it the long one or short that I like, I think
Finally end up loving both.
by meenas17
10 Oct 2019, 16:08
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Known As Chettys
Replies: 9
Views: 939

Re: Known As Chettys

Bob, think I have revised to your satisfaction,
It can be still improved.
Will do later.
Thanks,
by meenas17
09 Oct 2019, 18:05
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Known As Chettys
Replies: 9
Views: 939

Re: Known As Chettys

Posted a revised version.
by meenas17
09 Oct 2019, 16:11
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Hank
Replies: 6
Views: 596

Re: Hank

Enjoyed the humour.
by meenas17
07 Oct 2019, 14:02
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Known As Chettys
Replies: 9
Views: 939

Re: Known As Chettys

The poem lacks the verve. I will try to improve, Bob.
Do not know how far I could go.
Anyhow.
Thanks, Bob.

Siva, the answer to you is the same.
I will attempt.
Thanks,
by meenas17
06 Oct 2019, 17:25
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Known As Chettys
Replies: 9
Views: 939

Re: Known As Chettys

Thanks, Kent.
Your compliment means a lot.
by meenas17
05 Oct 2019, 07:13
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Beethoven's Dark Moods
Replies: 7
Views: 702

Re: Beethoven's Dark Moods

Very well done, Bob.
by meenas17
04 Oct 2019, 18:44
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Known As Chettys
Replies: 9
Views: 939

Known As Chettys

Revised Version North Eastward Ho! a journey on rough seas in the year 1850. by a trading community, hundred of men, a score of teen aged boys hair closely shaven. ash smeared on the forehead, arms and body, the three lines symbolizes Saivisim Cooks, barbers, dhobis , carry the luggage in iron trunk...
by meenas17
27 Sep 2019, 15:25
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Mexican Songs
Replies: 7
Views: 958

Re: Mexican Songs

the currency that crosses
all borders.
Like the lines Bob.
by meenas17
24 Sep 2019, 18:54
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Hey There!
Replies: 3
Views: 869

Re: Hey There!

It was a big deal, 50 years ago. True.
What did we achieve?
by meenas17
24 Sep 2019, 15:55
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Genetics
Replies: 4
Views: 798

Re: Genetics

Ken, thanks .
by meenas17
24 Sep 2019, 15:55
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Genetics
Replies: 4
Views: 798

Re: Genetics

Thanks, Billy.
Pain a blessing!
That which cannot be avoided.
by meenas17
23 Sep 2019, 18:13
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Genetics
Replies: 4
Views: 798

Genetics

A wholesome baby, plump and bald, with big eyes, without a chin born as a fourth child, lies pretty smiling all the way, a contented child, as seen from the day of birth, stays happy the rest of the years. Two more siblings, boys, come after her in an interval of few years. add to the bustle. The fa...
by meenas17
20 Sep 2019, 18:08
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Hey There!
Replies: 3
Views: 869

Hey There!

The farthest turns the nearest. science manipulates while the poor poets eulogize all the more,the missile a and the lander strike. No more of singing the beauty of Moon, the pictures shot by the rockets reveal nothing grand. The planet is another with crates and rocks an uneven terrain not the most...
by meenas17
20 Sep 2019, 17:49
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Annunciation
Replies: 7
Views: 1279

Re: The Annunciation

Good one, Ken though not the best.
by meenas17
18 Sep 2019, 16:08
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: My Funeral
Replies: 13
Views: 1725

Re: My Funeral

Beautiful writing , Bob. You rock.
Wish I could write like you.
by meenas17
15 Sep 2019, 12:51
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: On The Shelves
Replies: 4
Views: 785

Re: On The Shelves

Yes , trimming could make it better.
I will post a revision .
Thanks, Bob
by meenas17
15 Sep 2019, 12:50
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: On The Shelves
Replies: 4
Views: 785

Re: On The Shelves

Thanks Ken.
by meenas17
13 Sep 2019, 18:00
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: On The Shelves
Replies: 4
Views: 785

On The Shelves

lie my literature books.perfectly bounded neatly covered in brown. They are my proud possession, been with me for years right from my college days, Those days, how I read line by line the poems and dramas. how much I enjoyed, how well I performed, History Of English Literature a wholesome edition, a...
by meenas17
13 Sep 2019, 17:32
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Mistaken Identity
Replies: 7
Views: 1319

Re: Mistaken Identity

Love the imagery Eira.
the concluding line of autumn;s breath --- a phantom turns to mist leaves a picturesque image.
by meenas17
13 Sep 2019, 17:29
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Dante's Outer Circles
Replies: 12
Views: 1674

Re: Dante's Outer Circles

Michael has summed up the exquisiteness of the poem,by saying it will find a home in Dante journal.
by meenas17
13 Sep 2019, 17:26
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Percy Shelley
Replies: 7
Views: 1054

Re: Percy Shelley

Nicely pictured the eccentricities of Shelley and Byron,
" a meadow of perfumes" illustrates their infirmities with a soft echo.

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