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by meenas17
05 Dec 2019, 14:24
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Moon Walk
Replies: 11
Views: 285

Re: The Moon Walk

Judy gives useful suggestions. Her edits are effective and render the verse enjoyable.
Great!
by meenas17
27 Nov 2019, 18:56
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Could Be For "Something"
Replies: 1
Views: 238

Could Be For "Something"

Being a day of tedium chasing through for requirements in the immigration for long time visas. Last renewal was not so tiring. The regulations have changed. The officials turn unfriendly, resent direct applicants, insist to come through agents. The application is simple, easy to fill, the conditions...
by meenas17
09 Nov 2019, 20:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: One of A Rare Breed
Replies: 2
Views: 758

Re: One of A Rare Breed

Michael ( MV)
Very true.
Should be "One of A Common Breed"

Meena
by meenas17
08 Nov 2019, 20:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: One of A Rare Breed
Replies: 2
Views: 758

One of A Rare Breed

That one my cook had been with me for ten years,in an impulse calls quit.. Taken by surprise. I fail to seek the reason. He is temperamental goes off his head. turns quarrelsome finds fault with fellow workers. Fights with them. Screams and yells. He is an expert cook prepares dishes in no time and ...
by meenas17
08 Nov 2019, 20:11
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Walt Whitman, 1863
Replies: 7
Views: 1313

Re: Walt Whitman, 1863

A good poem, Bob.
Each stanza is relevant,
One leads to the other, yet they stand out.
That be the beauty of the poem.
by meenas17
06 Nov 2019, 20:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Tryst
Replies: 6
Views: 1526

Re: A Tryst

Ken, thanks for the understanding.
I keep getting such dreams very often nowadays.
This being one of them.
by meenas17
06 Nov 2019, 20:18
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Tryst
Replies: 6
Views: 1526

Re: A Tryst

Judy, thanks for commenting.
I will look into the faults.
I state it is a dream.
Dreams do not have logic.
It is the subconscious that is working.
by meenas17
03 Nov 2019, 20:21
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Tryst
Replies: 6
Views: 1526

A Tryst

Caught in between the traffic , I stand aghast. Wholly drenched, the clothes cling to the body. My feet trapped in the slush remains static. I attempt to pull them out, I slip and slope. Straighten myself stand all through unable to take a step. Rains turn torrential I go down slowly inch by inch. S...
by meenas17
03 Nov 2019, 19:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Across The River
Replies: 10
Views: 2070

Re: Across The River

Yes, Judy .
3 votes. thumbs up!
by meenas17
03 Nov 2019, 19:44
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Crossing Into South Carolina
Replies: 8
Views: 2678

Re: Crossing Into South Carolina

Quiet distracting .
by meenas17
29 Oct 2019, 06:08
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Sparrow Found (1917) - V2
Replies: 5
Views: 1650

Re: A Sparrow Found (1917)

An elaborate one. Never once I lost interest.
by meenas17
29 Oct 2019, 06:06
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Planters Moon
Replies: 7
Views: 1553

Re: Planters Moon

The last stanza is strong.
Man's inability to that of a worm's possibility.
Great imagery.
by meenas17
29 Oct 2019, 06:04
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Red Spider Lilies
Replies: 4
Views: 1249

Re: Red Spider Lilies

Flowers extend companionship.
Well written.
by meenas17
25 Oct 2019, 15:35
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 1431

Re: A Maze I Am In

Billy,

Your editing has unwound the maze I am in .
The version is an improvement of the first.
I go with it.
Thanks,
by meenas17
25 Oct 2019, 15:34
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 1431

Re: A Maze I Am In

Judy, I do not know how to clear the obscurity.
I tried but failed.
by meenas17
25 Oct 2019, 15:32
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 1431

Re: A Maze I Am In

Bob, I too feel the first one is better.
The revision is not at all good.
by meenas17
24 Oct 2019, 20:50
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 1431

Re: A Maze I Am In

I have posted a revision, Hope it reads better.
by meenas17
24 Oct 2019, 07:26
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Maze I Am In
Replies: 9
Views: 1431

A Maze I Am In

The retinue around me keeps vigil for what I do not know, They watch every move and every deal with uncanny insight, I am neither extraordinary nor foolish, in between both a very ordinary one. Those eyes behind my back chases me wherever I go. I converse with very few, even that is monitored. with ...
by meenas17
24 Oct 2019, 07:26
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Someone's Hallelujah (revised(
Replies: 10
Views: 1433

Re: Someone's Hallelujah (revised(

Think you have done the maximum.
by meenas17
24 Oct 2019, 07:24
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Poet as Goldfish in a Pet Store
Replies: 13
Views: 1783

Re: Poet as Goldfish in a Pet Store

It is fine, Bob. Reached the level.
Needs no more.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2019, 19:22
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Neighbors
Replies: 9
Views: 1314

Re: Neighbors

Judy, welcome to the board.
Your entry has brought a stream of poems.
The Board is bustling with activity.
I agree with you, Judy,
No poem is fictional.
The best of the poems bear at least a trace of personal info or experience.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2019, 19:15
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Pay At Your End
Replies: 6
Views: 1031

Re: Pay At Your End

Judy, thanks for the edits.
I have inserted a dash and changed and to or.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2019, 19:11
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Pay At Your End
Replies: 6
Views: 1031

Re: Pay At Your End

Thanks Bob.
A reflection of my experience.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2019, 19:11
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Pay At Your End
Replies: 6
Views: 1031

Re: Pay At Your End

Very true! Ken.
Thanks for stopping by,

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