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by meenas17
15 Nov 2020, 17:31
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: While I Was Burning
Replies: 4
Views: 700

Re: While I Was Burning

I always like your poems, Ken.
by meenas17
14 Nov 2020, 18:31
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
Replies: 6
Views: 894

Re: Long Hair Named Desire

I am trying to focus on imagery as you have suggested many times,
by meenas17
13 Nov 2020, 17:43
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
Replies: 6
Views: 894

Re: Long Hair Named Desire

Ken,
Pleasant comment too!
by meenas17
13 Nov 2020, 17:42
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
Replies: 6
Views: 894

Re: Long Hair Named Desire

Billy,
Could be, but we say so In India, if I am not mistaken.
by meenas17
11 Nov 2020, 15:28
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
Replies: 6
Views: 894

Long Hair Named Desire

I am fascinated by long hair one of my friends had, I do not know if she still has a very long hair, thick gleaming reached up to the knees, My short, soft, wavy hair looked so poorly beside hers. My mom plaited them when I was a kid. I tie my hair little above the neck held by a small black hair ba...
by meenas17
09 Nov 2020, 19:36
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Shivapuranam
Replies: 2
Views: 823

Re: Shivapuranam

I miss the imagery part, Bob.
I have to pay attention.
by meenas17
08 Nov 2020, 18:14
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
Replies: 14
Views: 1710

Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:

Name Meena email meenas17@gmail.com It is my original unpublished poem, I am not representing any other board. Navaratri Revision The dolls come down from the attic the young ones jump all over, the adults descend in style while the older stagger. They look colourful Krishna shimmers in blue while L...
by meenas17
07 Nov 2020, 20:33
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Shivapuranam
Replies: 2
Views: 823

Shivapuranam

One son on the hills angered, the other one on the lap, complacent Shiva and Umayal retire to their abode, very much that of in every home. Having spent the days like the mortals. watching events, going out in their case in procession, dancing with passion being an entertainment, enjoying conjugalit...
by meenas17
06 Nov 2020, 09:36
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
Replies: 14
Views: 1710

Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:

Thanks for the nomination.
I accept.
by meenas17
01 Nov 2020, 20:14
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: String of Flowers
Replies: 4
Views: 1115

Re: String of Flowers

Imagery, I have to try, Billy,
by meenas17
01 Nov 2020, 20:13
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Floods Down The Road
Replies: 4
Views: 1063

Re: Floods Down The Road

Thanks, Billy.
by meenas17
30 Oct 2020, 20:54
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Floods Down The Road
Replies: 4
Views: 1063

Floods Down The Road

Flooding happens in leaps and bounds roads remain drenched, streets inundated as rains pour in composure neither heavy nor light incessant and uninterrupted. it is yesterday, I find the city to sink in water, not an ordinary rain but a heavy downpour falling without a pause water enters the low lyin...
by meenas17
30 Oct 2020, 20:53
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Return of the fox revised
Replies: 10
Views: 2243

Re: Return of the fox revised

Whatever it be to others, it is a good poem for me.
by meenas17
30 Oct 2020, 20:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: String of Flowers
Replies: 4
Views: 1115

Re: String of Flowers

I will try, Bob.
Do not how far I will succeed.
Anyhow, thanks for commenting.
by meenas17
28 Oct 2020, 20:51
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: String of Flowers
Replies: 4
Views: 1115

String of Flowers

The flowers in the garden expressing colours and variance spreading fragrance and beauty fascinate. Those that go to make a garland of roses, bright red in hue the other of Jasmine, pure white sensitize the beholder. The deities stand resplendent with flowery adornments Weddings include a space wher...
by meenas17
27 Oct 2020, 12:24
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Nature of Man
Replies: 5
Views: 1303

Re: Nature of Man

Thanks, Bob.
So kind of you.
by meenas17
26 Oct 2020, 19:26
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Nature of Man
Replies: 5
Views: 1303

Re: Nature of Man

I have revised. Do not know how far it reaches the reader?
by meenas17
26 Oct 2020, 18:43
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Nature of Man
Replies: 5
Views: 1303

Re: Nature of Man

Bob,
I understand. It has to be enriched
Thanks
by meenas17
24 Oct 2020, 19:29
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Nature of Man
Replies: 5
Views: 1303

Nature of Man

Revision The sun and its radiance being infectious, catches the mood, It is happiness that clings so firm. The moment creates a flutter. Enthusiasm is writ large on the face, eyes unfold like a bud and enlarge wide, the lips broaden with grin smothered by joy as fresh as morning dew. Tempestuous it ...
by meenas17
24 Oct 2020, 19:28
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Beggar's Lice
Replies: 5
Views: 1677

Re: Beggar's Lice

Theory of evolution in short.
by meenas17
24 Oct 2020, 17:50
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Apprehensive
Replies: 2
Views: 1046

Re: Apprehensive

Thanks, Ken.
by meenas17
23 Oct 2020, 18:49
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Apprehensive
Replies: 2
Views: 1046

Apprehensive

It is a little before evening a mild drizzle starts a breeze in the background love to run out in the open. I do with an impulse the drops fall on me like soft petals, one on the head the other on my nose, the rest on the shoulders, I shake myself gently the drops drip one by one on my chest down to...
by meenas17
23 Oct 2020, 18:48
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: To My Old Age
Replies: 9
Views: 1677

Re: Ode to My Old Age

I can relate to this Bob.
'my legs heavy as grief', Very apt expression
I feel the same way. My legs give me lot of trouble,.
Nothing much to change.
by meenas17
22 Oct 2020, 19:08
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Navaratri
Replies: 7
Views: 1861

Re: Navaratri

Revised with Billy's and Michael's inputs.
by meenas17
19 Oct 2020, 18:40
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Return of the fox revised
Replies: 10
Views: 2243

Re: Return of the fox

White clouds spread across the sky
like coagulated blood.

this is poetry, Billy.

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