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I always like your poems, Ken.

I am trying to focus on imagery as you have suggested many times,

Ken,
Pleasant comment too!

Billy,
Could be, but we say so In India, if I am not mistaken.

I am fascinated by long hair one of my friends had, I do not know if she still has a very long hair, thick gleaming reached up to the knees, My short, soft, wavy hair looked so poorly beside hers. My mom plaited them when I was a kid. I tie my hair little above the neck held by a small black hair ba...

I miss the imagery part, Bob.
I have to pay attention.

Name Meena email meenas17@gmail.com It is my original unpublished poem, I am not representing any other board. Navaratri Revision The dolls come down from the attic the young ones jump all over, the adults descend in style while the older stagger. They look colourful Krishna shimmers in blue while L...

One son on the hills angered, the other one on the lap, complacent Shiva and Umayal retire to their abode, very much that of in every home. Having spent the days like the mortals. watching events, going out in their case in procession, dancing with passion being an entertainment, enjoying conjugalit...

Thanks for the nomination.
I accept.

Imagery, I have to try, Billy,

Thanks, Billy.

Flooding happens in leaps and bounds roads remain drenched, streets inundated as rains pour in composure neither heavy nor light incessant and uninterrupted. it is yesterday, I find the city to sink in water, not an ordinary rain but a heavy downpour falling without a pause water enters the low lyin...

Whatever it be to others, it is a good poem for me.

I will try, Bob.
Do not how far I will succeed.
Anyhow, thanks for commenting.

The flowers in the garden expressing colours and variance spreading fragrance and beauty fascinate. Those that go to make a garland of roses, bright red in hue the other of Jasmine, pure white sensitize the beholder. The deities stand resplendent with flowery adornments Weddings include a space wher...

Thanks, Bob.
So kind of you.

I have revised. Do not know how far it reaches the reader?

Bob,
I understand. It has to be enriched
Thanks

Revision The sun and its radiance being infectious, catches the mood, It is happiness that clings so firm. The moment creates a flutter. Enthusiasm is writ large on the face, eyes unfold like a bud and enlarge wide, the lips broaden with grin smothered by joy as fresh as morning dew. Tempestuous it ...

Theory of evolution in short.

Thanks, Ken.

It is a little before evening a mild drizzle starts a breeze in the background love to run out in the open. I do with an impulse the drops fall on me like soft petals, one on the head the other on my nose, the rest on the shoulders, I shake myself gently the drops drip one by one on my chest down to...

I can relate to this Bob.
'my legs heavy as grief', Very apt expression
I feel the same way. My legs give me lot of trouble,.
Nothing much to change.

Revised with Billy's and Michael's inputs.

White clouds spread across the sky
like coagulated blood.

this is poetry, Billy.