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by karenrandau
21 Jul 2014, 19:08
Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
Topic: Group I
Replies: 22
Views: 17438

Re: Group I

Christine, here is my critique of what you've posted. I'm only one week out of surgery today, and I couldn't get to this any sooner. 1. Scene length and structure (1-5): 5 – the scene continues beyond this point, but I think the structure is good. I'm glad you posted more than 500 words. I think 1,0...
by karenrandau
13 Jul 2014, 05:17
Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
Topic: Group I
Replies: 22
Views: 17438

Re: Group I

Ben, Nice job! I'm going to attempt to follow Michael's criteria (http://www.authorsalon.com/craft/view/96/) in offering my comments. Since this is only 500 words, that has proven a little challenging. I had to read the first sentence several times to understand it. Now that I've figured it out, I a...

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