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- 23 Jul 2014, 22:15
- Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
- Topic: Group I
- Replies: 22
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Re: Group I
Thank you so much guys. This is incredibly helpful. Especially the advice about including her name earlier and catching the passive tense. Thank you. Am hoping to return the favor with a critique of all your great stuff soon. Am currently spending a great deal of time in my mini-van driving everyone...
- 18 Jul 2014, 18:03
- Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
- Topic: Group I
- Replies: 22
- Views: 110019
Re: Group I
Hi all, I hope I'm doing this right. Per someone else's advice, I've posted a bit more than 500 words, most like 800. Great to see all your work and hopefully my kid will give me a few free minutes to add to the critique soon :-) Christine Chapter One The Spy Flies hover around my head. I can’t rais...