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by MikeMaguire
12 Jul 2014, 02:54
Forum: New York Pitch Conference Novel Execution Forum
Topic: Group I
Replies: 22
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Re: Group I

Nice work, Ben! "Axe Body Spray" is spelled with an E. I'm a little embarrassed I caught that. The only grammar/clarity thing I'm not sure about is the comma in the first sentence between, "lowered his camera," and, "away from the man..." On my first read, I didn't want that comma to be there. But m...