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Here's my suggestion, I accidentally posted it as a new tread

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Theres 2 scenarios that I can think of for the next part. First one is, creating series of events where pieces by pieces revelations will show up on why she has mixed emotions and why she is is being deceitful and secretive. Second, how about creating a part where her conditions gets worse. Where Ai...