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by FranktheFrank
21 Jan 2019, 15:48
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Mozart’s Sister, Heartbroken
Replies: 3
Views: 96

Re: Mozart’s Sister, Heartbroken

Title change removes some doubt about the main character.
by FranktheFrank
19 Jan 2019, 17:25
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Het Gele Huis - Edit 3 - 17 Jan 2019
Replies: 10
Views: 515

Re: Het Gele Huis - Edit 3 - 17 Jan 2019

Thanks Bob
I have altered again and hope it sets the gender of N
and what she's about.
by FranktheFrank
18 Jan 2019, 00:39
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The River Merchant
Replies: 19
Views: 806

Re: The River Merchant

Yes, the river side village name sets the scene and place well.
by FranktheFrank
17 Jan 2019, 20:06
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Het Gele Huis - Edit 3 - 17 Jan 2019
Replies: 10
Views: 515

Re: Het Gele Huis - edit 2

Thanks Dale, have edited, should now be clear.
by FranktheFrank
17 Jan 2019, 19:58
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The River Merchant
Replies: 19
Views: 806

Re: A Chinese Poet Awaits his Wife's Return

A Poet Writing of his Wife's Return.

A Poet Awaiting his Wife's Return.
by FranktheFrank
12 Jan 2019, 02:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Please CONTACT When Spammers Appear
Replies: 7
Views: 3819

Re: Please CONTACT When Spammers Appear

4 dating sites advertising in poetry.
by FranktheFrank
09 Jan 2019, 15:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Muni
Replies: 8
Views: 553

Re: Muni

Suggested edits

throughout the day s1

into my skin s2

she shows s3

mysteriously she stop pinching,
no more pain. s4

Your writing is growing keep going.
best wishes.
by FranktheFrank
08 Jan 2019, 02:27
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Running on the Spectrum (revised first 3 stanzas)
Replies: 30
Views: 3104

Re: Running on the Sprectrum (revision 2)

Sprectrum is the Welsh word
for spectrum? :)
by FranktheFrank
08 Jan 2019, 02:24
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The River Merchant
Replies: 19
Views: 806

Re: A Chinese Poet Awaits his Wife's Return

Agree with Michael with his suggestion that
'roam' is far more interesting than 'travel'
and tells a story all on it own.
by FranktheFrank
07 Jan 2019, 04:40
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Het Gele Huis - Edit 3 - 17 Jan 2019
Replies: 10
Views: 515

Re: Het Gele Huis

Thanks Bob, Meena and Eire, valid comments all,
maybe it should be a ladies' hairdresser and t'other
a pets' shampoo parlour.

Edit 2 -refined with a small amount of word play.
by FranktheFrank
05 Jan 2019, 21:35
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Wedding Of The Year
Replies: 10
Views: 785

Re: Wedding Of The Year

Seek and you will find. :)
by FranktheFrank
05 Jan 2019, 03:56
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Wedding Of The Year
Replies: 10
Views: 785

Re: Wedding Of The Year

Yes, it has. :)
by FranktheFrank
05 Jan 2019, 00:08
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming January IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 781

Re: Upcoming January IBPC 2019:

Best wishes all.
by FranktheFrank
03 Jan 2019, 20:42
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Wedding Of The Year
Replies: 10
Views: 785

Re: Wedding Of The Year

Very nice, I understand you had this nominated, it deserved the nod.
by FranktheFrank
03 Jan 2019, 20:41
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The River Merchant
Replies: 19
Views: 806

Re: A Chinese Poet Awaits his Wife's Return

It is sweet, lots of detail, nature.
by FranktheFrank
03 Jan 2019, 20:39
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Muni
Replies: 8
Views: 553

Re: Muni

Intriguing
is the word. Nice .
by FranktheFrank
03 Jan 2019, 20:38
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Het Gele Huis - Edit 3 - 17 Jan 2019
Replies: 10
Views: 515

Het Gele Huis - Edit 3 - 17 Jan 2019

The Yellow House My dream house begins with a token fence made from tempered bronze that protects a box hedge of yellow privet. It sits under a permanent blue sky with white cirrus clouds that remind one of pillow-cased foam on the azure of the Aegean Sea. At the sunny front are doors that lead to t...
by FranktheFrank
17 Dec 2018, 18:18
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Renaming Constellations
Replies: 9
Views: 1395

Re: Renaming Constellations

I like it Bob,
Last stanza/strophe not needed in my opinion.
Afterwards - one word.
Frig - with an 'e', fridge unless you meant frigging coolbox. :)

Consider: constellations that I call . . .
by FranktheFrank
11 Dec 2018, 03:33
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Thank You Message to the Group
Replies: 3
Views: 814

Re: Thank You Message to the Group

Thanks you for the input Doug, I notice you have joined three forums lately
and have made a few remarks about this topic, i.e. numbers posting on the
boards/forums. I hope you find this a good place to stay and post your work.
by FranktheFrank
07 Dec 2018, 06:30
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Christmas in Wales
Replies: 2
Views: 605

Re: Christmas in Wales

Thanks Bob, much appreciated.
Best wishes for your entry in the IBPC for November Bob
you should get something, I hope.
by FranktheFrank
06 Dec 2018, 13:02
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Miracle of Flight
Replies: 6
Views: 1024

Re: The Miracle of Flight

Now you have explained Dale
maybe make it more personal.
He waves then wonders
if the pilot can see him
or cares he is high
on Scotch whiskey.
He waves to the pilot,
knowing he is seen, but does
He mind he is high on corn whiskey.

The capitalisation of He may give the reader a clue.
by FranktheFrank
06 Dec 2018, 12:40
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Christmas in Wales
Replies: 2
Views: 605

A Christmas in Wales

Looking through my bedroom window, out into the moonlight and the unending smoke-coloured snow . . . I said words to close the holy darkness, and then I slept. Dylan Thomas, A Child's Christmas in Wales, When the wind came from the north, chaos ensued through iced up windows, frost, and stalactites...
by FranktheFrank
06 Dec 2018, 12:33
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Cuddles And Giggles
Replies: 8
Views: 1250

Re: Cuddles And Giggles

Being teased, so cruel Meena, yet love abides.

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