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- 14 Nov 2020, 18:31
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 10698
Re: Long Hair Named Desire
I am trying to focus on imagery as you have suggested many times,
- 13 Nov 2020, 17:43
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 10698
Re: Long Hair Named Desire
Ken,
Pleasant comment too!
Pleasant comment too!
- 13 Nov 2020, 17:42
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 10698
Re: Long Hair Named Desire
Billy,
Could be, but we say so In India, if I am not mistaken.
Could be, but we say so In India, if I am not mistaken.
- 11 Nov 2020, 15:28
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Long Hair Named Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 10698
Long Hair Named Desire
I am fascinated by long hair one of my friends had, I do not know if she still has a very long hair, thick gleaming reached up to the knees, My short, soft, wavy hair looked so poorly beside hers. My mom plaited them when I was a kid. I tie my hair little above the neck held by a small black hair ba...
- 09 Nov 2020, 19:36
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Shivapuranam
- Replies: 2
- Views: 6534
Re: Shivapuranam
I miss the imagery part, Bob.
I have to pay attention.
I have to pay attention.
- 08 Nov 2020, 18:14
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
- Replies: 14
- Views: 22669
Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
Name Meena email meenas17@gmail.com It is my original unpublished poem, I am not representing any other board. Navaratri Revision The dolls come down from the attic the young ones jump all over, the adults descend in style while the older stagger. They look colourful Krishna shimmers in blue while L...
- 07 Nov 2020, 20:33
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Shivapuranam
- Replies: 2
- Views: 6534
Shivapuranam
One son on the hills angered, the other one on the lap, complacent Shiva and Umayal retire to their abode, very much that of in every home. Having spent the days like the mortals. watching events, going out in their case in procession, dancing with passion being an entertainment, enjoying conjugalit...
- 06 Nov 2020, 09:36
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
- Replies: 14
- Views: 22669
Re: Upcoming November IBPC 2020:
Thanks for the nomination.
I accept.
I accept.
- 01 Nov 2020, 20:14
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: String of Flowers
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8601
Re: String of Flowers
Imagery, I have to try, Billy,
- 01 Nov 2020, 20:13
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Floods Down The Road
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8497
Re: Floods Down The Road
Thanks, Billy.
- 30 Oct 2020, 20:54
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Floods Down The Road
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8497
Floods Down The Road
Flooding happens in leaps and bounds roads remain drenched, streets inundated as rains pour in composure neither heavy nor light incessant and uninterrupted. it is yesterday, I find the city to sink in water, not an ordinary rain but a heavy downpour falling without a pause water enters the low lyin...
- 30 Oct 2020, 20:53
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Return of the fox revised
- Replies: 10
- Views: 15418
Re: Return of the fox revised
Whatever it be to others, it is a good poem for me.
- 30 Oct 2020, 20:20
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: String of Flowers
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8601
Re: String of Flowers
I will try, Bob.
Do not how far I will succeed.
Anyhow, thanks for commenting.
Do not how far I will succeed.
Anyhow, thanks for commenting.
- 28 Oct 2020, 20:51
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: String of Flowers
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8601
String of Flowers
The flowers in the garden expressing colours and variance spreading fragrance and beauty fascinate. Those that go to make a garland of roses, bright red in hue the other of Jasmine, pure white sensitize the beholder. The deities stand resplendent with flowery adornments Weddings include a space wher...
- 27 Oct 2020, 12:24
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Nature of Man
- Replies: 5
- Views: 9099
Re: Nature of Man
Thanks, Bob.
So kind of you.
So kind of you.
- 26 Oct 2020, 19:26
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Nature of Man
- Replies: 5
- Views: 9099
Re: Nature of Man
I have revised. Do not know how far it reaches the reader?
- 26 Oct 2020, 18:43
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Nature of Man
- Replies: 5
- Views: 9099
Re: Nature of Man
Bob,
I understand. It has to be enriched
Thanks
I understand. It has to be enriched
Thanks
- 24 Oct 2020, 19:29
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Nature of Man
- Replies: 5
- Views: 9099
Nature of Man
Revision The sun and its radiance being infectious, catches the mood, It is happiness that clings so firm. The moment creates a flutter. Enthusiasm is writ large on the face, eyes unfold like a bud and enlarge wide, the lips broaden with grin smothered by joy as fresh as morning dew. Tempestuous it ...
- 24 Oct 2020, 19:28
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Beggar's Lice
- Replies: 5
- Views: 9696
Re: Beggar's Lice
Theory of evolution in short.
- 24 Oct 2020, 17:50
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Apprehensive
- Replies: 2
- Views: 6174
Re: Apprehensive
Thanks, Ken.
- 23 Oct 2020, 18:49
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Apprehensive
- Replies: 2
- Views: 6174
Apprehensive
It is a little before evening a mild drizzle starts a breeze in the background love to run out in the open. I do with an impulse the drops fall on me like soft petals, one on the head the other on my nose, the rest on the shoulders, I shake myself gently the drops drip one by one on my chest down to...
- 23 Oct 2020, 18:48
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: To My Old Age
- Replies: 9
- Views: 13410
Re: Ode to My Old Age
I can relate to this Bob.
'my legs heavy as grief', Very apt expression
I feel the same way. My legs give me lot of trouble,.
Nothing much to change.
'my legs heavy as grief', Very apt expression
I feel the same way. My legs give me lot of trouble,.
Nothing much to change.
- 22 Oct 2020, 19:08
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Navaratri
- Replies: 7
- Views: 11811
Re: Navaratri
Revised with Billy's and Michael's inputs.
- 19 Oct 2020, 18:40
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Return of the fox revised
- Replies: 10
- Views: 15418
Re: Return of the fox
White clouds spread across the sky
like coagulated blood.
this is poetry, Billy.
like coagulated blood.
this is poetry, Billy.
- 19 Oct 2020, 16:16
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Navaratri
- Replies: 7
- Views: 11811
Re: Navaratri
Michael,
You have made the poem sharp,
Yours ia pointer to the span of life.
I will incorporate in the revision.
You have made the poem sharp,
Yours ia pointer to the span of life.
I will incorporate in the revision.