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- 27 Dec 2023, 01:38
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Big Guy
- Replies: 22
- Views: 12921
Re: Big Guy
What interests me is how you get over 9000 views since 12/17/23 for an average poem.
- 25 Dec 2023, 21:23
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Christmas Day 2023
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1247
Christmas Day 2023
Christmas Day 2023 I don't celebrate Christmas. I celebrate Jesus through the successive Manifestations of the Christ Spirit. I'm working today so my Christian friends can celebrate. I'm on call. I have an admission to hospice at 2 pm. In the mean time I'm writing this poem to the quiet, thinking o...
- 25 Dec 2023, 20:59
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: a senyru
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1611
Re: a senyru
Frank, ever had an elderly relative who was hard of hearing, misunderstood what you said.
- 25 Dec 2023, 19:34
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Testament
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2545
Re: Testament
I see this quite differently. I believe it uplifts Jesus beyond the glitz and miracle crazed rabble to the Carpenter Who no one listens to because He had no glitz, but His Word was their salvation, but they don't listen.
- 25 Dec 2023, 09:30
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: a senyru
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1611
a senyru
I didn't fart...
NO GRANDMA
HOW'S YOUR HEART?
NO GRANDMA
HOW'S YOUR HEART?
- 18 Dec 2023, 05:22
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Watching autumn
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3477
Re: Watching autumn
Thanks Caleb, Bob, Frank
- 16 Dec 2023, 05:07
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Watching autumn
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3477
Watching autumn
Watching autumn through the kitchen window, coming to grips with what I know. Letting what I don't know fall gently aside. I think about changing my plans, becoming a better person that people will remember. Forget the one great poem, the retiree painting in the garage, building the sculptures that...
- 16 Dec 2023, 05:00
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Ode to My Eyebrows
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3850
Re: Ode to My Eyebrows
I think this is a well-wrought poem. Universally relatable. I have no suggestions to make it better.
- 16 Dec 2023, 04:58
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Tambourine Man
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4249
Re: Tambourine Man
Thanks Caleb, welcome. I don't poet here as much as Bob and Frank, but I've always liked the Block. Siva posts probably more than me, too.
- 12 Dec 2023, 02:57
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Emma
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2013
Re: Emma
Nice poem. Brevity works for the poem. I don’t see that as an oxymoron. Anyway I got the impression they had both lost the fire. If you say Tom then it’s one-sided which maybe that’s what you want. Just my 2 cents.
- 03 Dec 2023, 04:39
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Discontent Body
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3626
Re: Discontent Body
Thanks, Bob
- 30 Nov 2023, 18:07
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Discontent Body
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3626
Discontent Body
Discontent Body I've had enough of this dying. I mean, what's the point? Long lists of things still not done. I want a life with nothing to do. Contentment. It's all one in the same, anyway. I know the taste of a Fuji apple, a Jonathan, of a kiwi, a lilikoi, fresh-squeezed pomegranate. Ah, but in t...
- 21 Nov 2023, 21:36
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Red Robe
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2359
Red Robe
Red Robe A red robe for eternity is the stranger's reward. In the raging river in the name you've called out in the night when the moon had nothing left to reveal drained of light, a face unknown to the drifter to the lover who's forgotten his own self gazing into every mirror finding nothing excep...
- 16 Nov 2023, 20:37
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Tambourine Man
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4249
Re: Tambourine Man
Thanks Frank and Bob
- 09 Nov 2023, 07:48
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Tambourine Man
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4249
Tambourine Man
Tambourine Man There was a born again who thought he was called. The Holy Spirit had burned away the alcohol, drugs, and cigarettes. Now, he sang on the campus knoll in front of the science building, witnessed from the boulder with a bronze plaque commemorating the founder. Nobody paid much attenti...
- 09 Nov 2023, 07:45
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Poem removed after workshopping for publication
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2415
Re: Christmas at Aberafan
Beautiful writing Frank. The second stanza reminds me of Dickens' Christmas.
- 11 Oct 2023, 05:56
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: An Aging Model from Paris
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1823
Re: An Aging Model from Paris
I like the way the narrative wanders and reveals so much about the model and about N.
- 11 Oct 2023, 03:32
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: A Poet Looks To His Dog For Help
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1893
Re: A Poet Looks To His Dog For Help
Too funny, Bob, like it all.
- 11 Oct 2023, 03:31
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Letting Go
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1841
Re: Letting Go
Thanks Bob
- 11 Oct 2023, 03:31
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: no wonder
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1761
Re: no wonder
Thanks Bob
- 22 Sep 2023, 22:27
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: no wonder
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1761
no wonder
no wonder the rain falls on the good and the bad under a moon all can see and say whose face is it that smiles or frowns on us the good go on being good the bad go on being bad until they all meet in Rumi's field where the sun shines on the golden wheat there are no tares to be cast into the fire t...
- 20 Sep 2023, 19:47
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Letting Go
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1841
Letting Go
Letting Go A young woman helps him out of the car. He tells me, Miss Coats, my music teacher. I say, he loves music, think, what kid doesn’t. She says, he's one of my best singers. He tells her, I get a little crazy, and laughs. She laughs and says, we have fun. Before she closes the car door, he t...
- 20 Sep 2023, 19:46
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Biography of a Mummy
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2646
Re: Biography of a Mummy
Like the revision, Bob. This poem evokes so many layers of thought, and so imaginative. Yes, how will we be remembered.
- 20 Sep 2023, 19:43
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: One of a Thousand Drunken Nights
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3936
Re: One of Thirty Thousand Nights
Yes, I have to agree with Bob. At first I thought maybe there were too many characters, but it all worked well and as Bob said, the ending is perfect.
- 10 Aug 2023, 07:42
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Deleted
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1854
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