I take that as a compliment, Ken, Bob.
Eira
I take that as a compliment, Ken, Bob.
I'm sure it will do well, BobBobBradshaw wrote: ↑11 Feb 2019, 04:53Thx so much, guys... glad you enjoyed it
I think I will submit it somewhere
Good idea, Frank. I'll look up the details. Should it go before or after the poem?FranktheFrank wrote: ↑10 Feb 2019, 13:54Suggestion Eira:
Place 'Calon Lan' as an epigraph.
with the credit to the song writer and reference the hymn.
Thanks Ken. I like revising almost as much as writing.
I felt that too with st 2 - I think it's becasuse there was no lead -in from stanza 1. Hoping this revision is better.BobBradshaw wrote: ↑03 Feb 2019, 03:20Like very much the last 2 stanzas, but S2 sounds awkward... needs a change of tense or a segue...something... focus on S2