I'm just trying to put Michael's arithmetic in order,
25% would mean you came somewhere in the last 1350.
Your poem was placed much better than that, between a fraction of one percent and almost 4 percent.
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- 19 Oct 2016, 12:25
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Sharing my good news with my friends!
- Replies: 7
- Views: 15797
- 19 Oct 2016, 02:47
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Killing them Softly (2012)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 29944
Re: Killing them Softly
Some deep thoughts there Michael, It is an ekphrastic based on a film clip.. The clue is in the title. The music is incidental to the plot, although crucial to bring out the pathos. It's a comedy, although insulated from all mirth, a twisted view of America, capitalism, gangsterism, and drug culture...
- 18 Oct 2016, 20:48
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Killing them Softly (2012)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 29944
Re: Killing them Softly
It's an ekphrastic Meena, yes, spot on. American neo-noir 2012.
- 18 Oct 2016, 15:14
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Sharing my good news with my friends!
- Replies: 7
- Views: 15797
Re: Sharing my good news with my friends!
Siva reached the top 3.7%
at worst 3.7%
if she came 4th then 7/100 of one percent
so between 7/100 x 1% and 3.7% depending on her actual placing.
at worst 3.7%
if she came 4th then 7/100 of one percent
so between 7/100 x 1% and 3.7% depending on her actual placing.
- 17 Oct 2016, 21:21
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: State of Despair [revised 13 Oct 2016]
- Replies: 12
- Views: 21705
Re: State of Despair [revised 13 Oct 2016]
Thanks Michael, I have addressed.
- 16 Oct 2016, 21:44
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Speaking In My Mind
- Replies: 12
- Views: 19739
Re: Speaking In My Mind
Something similar from : Mark Vagenaar, Voodoo of Ash, University of Wisconsin 2012 p. 46-47 poem: Gacela of the Bright Omen. Things in common: gacela, moon, ash.
- 16 Oct 2016, 21:07
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Killing them Softly (2012)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 29944
Re: Killing them Softly
Yes, fullest - noun and adjective, common English Usage - standard grammar. http://www.dictionary.com/browse/full Another way of looking at English usage is filling a balloon. Is the balloon full you may ask, yes it is full, but is it at it's fullest? well it could take more so its full but not at i...
- 16 Oct 2016, 14:12
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The Soul of The Infinite.
- Replies: 6
- Views: 11158
Re: The Soul of The Infinite.
Overwhelmed by the power of the ocean
a poem ghazal, very neatly laid out Meena.
Vast improvement in your presentation
and attention to detail.
No nits, very good and reflects the awe many experience at their first sight of the sea.
a poem ghazal, very neatly laid out Meena.
Vast improvement in your presentation
and attention to detail.
No nits, very good and reflects the awe many experience at their first sight of the sea.
- 16 Oct 2016, 13:57
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Killing them Softly (2012)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 29944
Killing them Softly (2012)
Love Letters Edward Heyman (lyrics) - Victor Young (music), Song: Love Letters, 1945 Sung by Ketty Lester 1982 Jackie Cogan: 'They cry, they plead, they beg, they piss themselves, they cry for their mothers. It gets embarrassing. I like to kill 'em softly; from a distance.' Film: 'Killing Them Soft...
- 16 Oct 2016, 13:31
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Psalms For The Drowned
- Replies: 13
- Views: 24298
Re: Psalms For The Drowned
What are laterns?
- 14 Oct 2016, 23:18
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Speaking In My Mind
- Replies: 12
- Views: 19739
Re: Speaking In My Mind
Or, as I say, you and me. [not keen on this refrain] Bouquet wine on the white table. The wind unpacks the restaurant closed in winter months, wind ripples the awning like a flag in a drying French lake, [metaphors galore ] or, as I say, you and me. Distant radio in the dining room, voices thin as a...
- 14 Oct 2016, 21:50
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Speaking In My Mind
- Replies: 12
- Views: 19739
Re: Speaking In My Mind
Siva
These things happen, cross communication.
Bernie is one of my favourite poets too.
Bernie, I did not do you poem justice let's see if I cna give a decent critique.
These things happen, cross communication.
Bernie is one of my favourite poets too.
Bernie, I did not do you poem justice let's see if I cna give a decent critique.
- 14 Oct 2016, 11:25
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Speaking In My Mind
- Replies: 12
- Views: 19739
Re: Speaking In My Mind
I cannot quite get into this poem Bernie, sorry.
- 14 Oct 2016, 11:24
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Black Moon
- Replies: 6
- Views: 12597
Re: Black Moon
Billy
if you are in a slump, write of what you know.
You have written some good poems in the past,
try reading other people's work for a spark and if nothing comes try ekphrastics.
if you are in a slump, write of what you know.
You have written some good poems in the past,
try reading other people's work for a spark and if nothing comes try ekphrastics.
- 13 Oct 2016, 22:53
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Black Moon
- Replies: 6
- Views: 12597
Re: Black Moon
Reminds me of: 'You're Never Alone with a Strand'.
- 13 Oct 2016, 22:42
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: State of Despair [revised 13 Oct 2016]
- Replies: 12
- Views: 21705
Re: State of Despair [revised 7 Oct 2016]
Thanks Bernie
I value the detached eye, ouch that hurt, detached eye. :0 )
Yes, point well made, shall remove.
I value the detached eye, ouch that hurt, detached eye. :0 )
Yes, point well made, shall remove.
- 13 Oct 2016, 14:36
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: How Well Did It Go
- Replies: 13
- Views: 18426
Re: How Well Did It Go
Its about cooked now Meena.
I will nominate as soon as Michael opens the monthly thread
for Palaver. Maybe Michael has some thoughts?
Well done.
He might suggest some tweaks, bear in mind how much Siva
had to do with her last poem for the IBPC
it was never ending.
I will nominate as soon as Michael opens the monthly thread
for Palaver. Maybe Michael has some thoughts?
Well done.
He might suggest some tweaks, bear in mind how much Siva
had to do with her last poem for the IBPC
it was never ending.
- 11 Oct 2016, 10:09
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: How Well Did It Go
- Replies: 13
- Views: 18426
Re: How Well Did It Go
Okay, when you post please place in first box, with date:
Redraft: 12 Oct 12016
or
Revision 12 Oct
best wishes with this poem
p.s. strangle is the weakest word, maybe struggle is better?
Redraft: 12 Oct 12016
or
Revision 12 Oct
best wishes with this poem
p.s. strangle is the weakest word, maybe struggle is better?
- 10 Oct 2016, 13:32
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: How Well Did It Go
- Replies: 13
- Views: 18426
Re: How Well Did It Go
Thank you for allowing me to work on this Meena.
The poem is almost ready so no big changes please.
The poem is almost ready so no big changes please.
- 10 Oct 2016, 03:42
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: How Well Did It Go
- Replies: 13
- Views: 18426
Re: How Well Did It Go
I am going to nominate this Meena. If successful I am going to let others punctuate this with you. It needs a few commas, here and there to make easier reading, some might disagree. Suggest you don't make any big changes, but some words do need tweaking. See if you can find them. :) It is best if yo...
- 09 Oct 2016, 17:51
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Psalms For The Drowned
- Replies: 13
- Views: 24298
Re: Psalms For The Drowned
Yes we got tht ken because her clothes had gone,
nevertheless would they be so flippant, wouldn't they have missed their mother in some way?
i.e. not joked about it.
Just a thought.
nevertheless would they be so flippant, wouldn't they have missed their mother in some way?
i.e. not joked about it.
Just a thought.
- 08 Oct 2016, 01:26
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Psalms For The Drowned
- Replies: 13
- Views: 24298
Re: Psalms For The Drowned
It could be tidied up a bit, I read the original from 2012 there seems to be errors in transmitting. Whenever someone came up missing [went missing not: came up missing] in our town, folks were quick [suggest: quick to think of the river, why the break at quick?] to blame the river. Men would load u...
- 08 Oct 2016, 01:10
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: State of Despair [revised 13 Oct 2016]
- Replies: 12
- Views: 21705
Re: State of Despair [revised 7 Oct 2016]
I have cut to the core Bob, it might be an improvement.
- 06 Oct 2016, 21:46
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Removed for Submissions
- Replies: 2
- Views: 7391
Re: Moriah
But thanks, sorry for coming back so late.
- 06 Oct 2016, 21:00
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Psalms For The Drowned
- Replies: 13
- Views: 24298
Re: Psalms For The Drowned
This is a good poem.
Probably good enough for poem-of-the week somewhere grand.
Edit by logging in and bottom of the screen is a box saying: edit.
Probably good enough for poem-of-the week somewhere grand.
Edit by logging in and bottom of the screen is a box saying: edit.