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by SivaRamanathan
03 Feb 2014, 19:40
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Dear Mother-In-law
Replies: 5
Views: 13138

Re: Dear Mother-In-law

Hi Michael
Thank you for asking me.I will post the poem first thing tomorrow morning--after ten hours.I would like to sleep on it.There is too much of prose in it.
It is an unpublished poem.
Siva
by SivaRamanathan
03 Feb 2014, 05:40
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: a floorshow on the kitchen table
Replies: 2
Views: 7552

Re: a floorshow on the kitchen table

Michael
Please send this poem to the February IBPC.

Siva
by SivaRamanathan
03 Feb 2014, 05:36
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Dear Mother-In-law
Replies: 5
Views: 13138

Dear Mother-In-law

You certainly knew when death came near you. You spoke about the old dark woman who pulled your hand. You shooed her away with your dentures. You spoke about a country chicken gruel; probably your husband liked that. There was also a necklace to be gifted to a granddaughter. You were carried like a ...
by SivaRamanathan
21 Jan 2014, 05:57
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Published in the "Wandering Minstrels'
Replies: 2
Views: 7857

Re: Published in the "Wandering Minstrels'

Michael
Thank you for both the links.
Siva
by SivaRamanathan
11 Jan 2014, 20:57
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Love Lingers Long-rehashed
Replies: 10
Views: 22236

Re: Love Lingers Long

dyerfrank
You have posted an edited version in Poetry and Palaver.Can you re -post it here?
by SivaRamanathan
07 Jan 2014, 13:52
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: found poem
Replies: 1
Views: 6780

Re: found poem

Billy
Good as it is. Nothing needs to be edited.The last line which talks of the ordinary snow deserves to be the last line--making a fitting ending.
by SivaRamanathan
06 Jan 2014, 09:45
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: "The One / law of averages"
Replies: 5
Views: 13371

Re: "The One / law of averages"

Michael

Did you write this in December? Can it go for the January IBPC? Sorry I missed this.

Siva
by SivaRamanathan
02 Jan 2014, 23:35
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Published in the "Wandering Minstrels'
Replies: 2
Views: 7857

Published in the "Wandering Minstrels'

A Love Poem -- Sivakami Velliangiri
Guest poem sent in by "Nelson JS Santhosh"
(Poem #1261) A Love Poem
Y o U
f
a
l
l
into my eyes
like red
chilli
d u s t.
-- Sivakami Velliangiri
by SivaRamanathan
02 Jan 2014, 23:09
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Love Lingers Long-rehashed
Replies: 10
Views: 22236

Re: Love Lingers Long

dyerfrank
That is the best thing I heard,this New Year. A great creative New Year to you!
by SivaRamanathan
02 Jan 2014, 22:12
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Love Lingers Long-rehashed
Replies: 10
Views: 22236

Re: Love Linger Long

Post subject: Love Linger(s) Long Love lingers long springs into my mind long after you (are)[had] gone(.) After you left nothingness no remembrance[r], no feeling(;) (a)[A] passing phase as (a)[A] carousel of loves.(?) [But,](W)[ w]hen tending my garden (I)swept Autumn leaves[,] that rustled in the...
by SivaRamanathan
02 Jan 2014, 17:51
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Love Lingers Long-rehashed
Replies: 10
Views: 22236

Re: Love Linger Long

dyerfrank
You should edit this. It is loquacious.And the grammar is faulty in places.Please take time to work on it.Take away all the cloying words.There are typos;( even in the title.)Above all don't be angry with me.If I had the time I would do it.
With all good intention
Siva
by SivaRamanathan
02 Jan 2014, 10:33
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: TGITG   (an after-byte)
Replies: 5
Views: 12972

Re: TGITG   (an after-byte)

Wish you a Happy New Year.

What about this poem and Billy's,'shall we listen to every bird?' for this January IBPC?
by SivaRamanathan
02 Jan 2014, 06:07
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: TGITG   (an after-byte)
Replies: 5
Views: 12972

Re: TGITG   (an after-byte)

Michael
A lot of philosophy in this.What is TGITG. This is a byte poem.Does the board accept short poems?
Siva
by SivaRamanathan
01 Jan 2014, 21:30
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Absence
Replies: 7
Views: 15185

Re: Absence

the Arctic Tern.
by SivaRamanathan
01 Jan 2014, 19:59
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Absence
Replies: 7
Views: 15185

Re: Absence

this story of survival.
by SivaRamanathan
01 Jan 2014, 14:54
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Absence
Replies: 7
Views: 15185

Re: Absence

Dyerfrank Thanks for reading. It is the Artic Tern.The 'twig ' is a model for 'responsibility' in Business Administration classes. An astrologer told me this stoct of survival. This web page is dedicated to communication on the migration of the Arctic tern – the longest migration ever recorded in an...
by SivaRamanathan
01 Jan 2014, 07:37
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Absence
Replies: 7
Views: 15185

Re: Absence

Michael Thank you for formatting this poem.I am learning a lot from you.And for suggesting to forward it to IBPC.I wrote this two years ago and posted it here on impulse.Now I am glad you have tailored it into a neat two liner poem with a last line that tells it all. And a happy New year to you and ...
by SivaRamanathan
01 Jan 2014, 07:32
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming IBPC January 2014:
Replies: 3
Views: 9300

Re: Upcoming IBPC January 2014:

I would like my unpublished poem 'Absence' to be forwarded to the IBPC to represent The Writers' Block.I am not representing any other group. sivakamivelliangiri@gmail.com Absence I thought I could keep you out; I cannot. You appear on Skype as full as Guru Purnima. Whenever I try to craft my poems ...
by SivaRamanathan
14 Dec 2013, 21:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Absence
Replies: 7
Views: 15185

Absence

I thought I could keep you out ; I cannot. You appear on Skype as full as Guru Purnima. Whenever I try to craft my poems I am stuck. When you were here I went about my way driving to poetry readings; Now that you are away you occupy my thoughts; the mind holds no vacuum. It is playing solitaire with...
by SivaRamanathan
07 Dec 2013, 18:36
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: "crosswise"
Replies: 2
Views: 7853

Re: "crosswise"

Is this concrete poetry, Michael?
by SivaRamanathan
05 Dec 2013, 06:29
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: candle
Replies: 4
Views: 12483

Re: candle

Just an experiment... candle now that everyone is gone God,there's a candle burning for me lit by a face I do not know and she thinks I might die now that everyone is gone where I cannot reach I would like to play ring around the rosie with the flame like to let the snowflakes decorate it in a circl...
by SivaRamanathan
03 Dec 2013, 21:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Misery of a Cold Winter
Replies: 7
Views: 17360

Re: Misery of a Cold Winter

I like reading this poem again and again.Michael is very good at editing. Not to mention the poetry.
by SivaRamanathan
02 Dec 2013, 19:53
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: LAST CALL: 12/5   Upcoming IBPC December 2013:
Replies: 5
Views: 12495

Re: Upcoming IBPC December 2013:

Michael Thanks for asking me to represent the board with my unpublished poem' Marakuli.' I am not representing any other Board and my e-mail id is sivakamivelliangiri@gmail.com Marakuli On my father’s side a tree at the moment of death; on my mother’s side the spirit of plain ground Yeti. I am born ...
by SivaRamanathan
01 Dec 2013, 21:14
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Marakuli
Replies: 1
Views: 6655

Marakuli

On my father’s side a tree at the moment of death; on my mother’s side the spirit of plain ground Yeti. I am born in the imagination whenever there is a dearth of real animals, quickly with coconut husk toes and nails of dead rhino skin I am monarch of the dark night. I howl like the wind, and conve...
by SivaRamanathan
03 Nov 2013, 07:34
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: 'Nostalgia'---Representing the board this November
Replies: 1
Views: 5931

'Nostalgia'---Representing the board this November

I would like to represent the board this November.I am not representing any other board.This my original,unpublished poem. sivakamivelliangiri@gmail.com Nostalgia Canine keen, the nose knows first - remembers the vapor rub from father's Vicks inhaler, and in a puff, the scent of of mother's Wills. T...