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Michael (MV)
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"artiste   not mis-taken"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 02 Mar 2015, 23:28

 
Miracles certainly aren't mistakes -
only Our Father creates miracles
and God doesn't make mistakes

no mistake youth
rhymes with truth
rhymes with Ruth

like Our Father
like His children
brother-sons & sister-daughters
never at work always at play in real time
no mistake pretend end-rhymes with end


Vision of ars colors the white
wash from her hair
and the pale from the frail frame:

no doubt Virginia Ruth
a miracle from maternity to the Fountain of Light
Truth & Youth
strawberry-blonde & peach aura forever
 
frolicking free & never falling again
in the fold of Our Father
sans seeds sans pits never in a jam
just strawberry-blonde & peachy forever
 
 
 

 
 
  
 
 

 
 
 
 

Aquavesto
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Joined: 10 Mar 2015, 11:58

Re: "artiste   not mis-taken"

#2 Post by Aquavesto » 10 Mar 2015, 12:46

From your post I'm getting the experience increased dramatically.

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