"primavera"

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Michael (MV)
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"primavera"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 21 Mar 2018, 05:43

 
 
Green is
a primary color
on the wheel

 
 
 
 
 
  
 
 

BobBradshaw
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Re: "primavera"

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 21 Mar 2018, 21:58

A stronger verb would help, or some type of action.

meenas17
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Re: "primavera"

#3 Post by meenas17 » 22 Mar 2018, 19:50

Green is a resource.
Signifies prosperity.
That is what I understand.
meenas17

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