Can You Forgive Me

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BobBradshaw
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Can You Forgive Me

#1 Post by BobBradshaw » 17 Sep 2018, 20:50

v2:
Can You Forgive Me


Were your heart an airport,
mine would be a plane
--its engine in flames,

the reckless pilot
pleading with the tower
for permission to land.

v1:
Can You Forgive Me


If your heart was an airport,
mine would be a plane
--its engine in flames,

the reckless pilot
pleading with the tower
for permission to land.

BobBradshaw
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Re: Can You Forgive Me

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 22 Sep 2018, 23:33

Tweaked

Kenneth2816
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Re: Can You Forgive Me

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 » 23 Sep 2018, 06:57

Yeah

Michael (MV)
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Re: Can You Forgive Me

#4 Post by Michael (MV) » 03 Oct 2018, 09:20

 
for clearance to land


8)

Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 

capricorn
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Re: Can You Forgive Me

#5 Post by capricorn » 04 Oct 2018, 01:20

A short poem with much to say - I like it!

Eira

BobBradshaw
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Re: Can You Forgive Me

#6 Post by BobBradshaw » 04 Oct 2018, 08:03

Thanks, Eira!

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