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#1 Post by penumbra » 27 May 2012, 20:59

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Billy
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Re: monkeys

#2 Post by Billy » 28 May 2012, 00:44

pen, I really like the opening stanza and stanzas 3 and 5. I'm still thinking and rereading this interesting poem.

Billy

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