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  a round from our Labor Day 2013:

Posted: 04 Sep 2013, 08:26
by Michael (MV)
 
cradlesongs all
my mother's songs
never stop singing
lullabies to me


never stop singing
lullabies to me
your songs mother
cradlesongs all

 
 
 
 
 

Re:   a round from our Labor Day 2013:

Posted: 04 Sep 2013, 08:58
by SivaRamanathan
Michael
I have read about 'mirror poetry"
Is this one?
S

Re:   a round from our Labor Day 2013:

Posted: 08 Sep 2013, 07:15
by Michael (MV)
Hi Siva,

To me, a mirror poem is a Visual Poem (VisPo), and displays a reflexive quality: A = A.



like leaving the cradle, then returning to the cradle
like leaving home, then returning home



Thanks for reading & your interest,


8)

Michael (MV)

 

  
 

Re:   a round from our Labor Day 2013:

Posted: 17 Sep 2013, 21:50
by ChanHurst
I love the brevity and simplicity of your poem. I enjoy it when a poet can say so much with so words. Kudos on this; enjoyed it very much :)

Re:   a round from our Labor Day 2013:

Posted: 07 Jul 2018, 21:35
by Bernie01
M---

no dice for me....sorry.


bernie