in an open field
not knowing that soil
still clings to them
that their bones
yearn to be found
before they turn to dust
that the wind sings
through them
the endless song
of their former lives
that worms weave
a space for souls
the dead are convinced
will come to them
on a grey winter day
as sparrows foraging
in snowless patches
of last year's stubble
in an open field
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Re: in an open field
Hi Billy,
a gradual, inevitable resurrection
that worms weave
a space for souls
the dead are convinced
will come to them
on a grey day
as sparrows foraging
in snowless patches
of last winter's stubble
Here @ the vernal equinox, I quote this miraculous trinity:
Hope Springs Eternal
and music-video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98LaApCB4l8

Michael (MV)
a gradual, inevitable resurrection
that worms weave
a space for souls
the dead are convinced
will come to them
on a grey day
as sparrows foraging
in snowless patches
of last winter's stubble
Here @ the vernal equinox, I quote this miraculous trinity:
Hope Springs Eternal
and music-video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98LaApCB4l8

Michael (MV)
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Re: in an open field
Billy
I have been reading this poem,almost every day.It is just right,nothing you can add or take away.
Siva
I have been reading this poem,almost every day.It is just right,nothing you can add or take away.
Siva
Re: in an open field
hello Billy---
i agree with Siva.
love that last image.
bernie
i agree with Siva.
love that last image.
bernie