In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

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Bernie01
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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#1 Post by Bernie01 » 07 Jan 2016, 22:41

Frank---

a glowing portrait all the more special because of the details....she refuses to make meals after a certain hour, that she is taller than the writer, the grand children and her murmurs as she tends the plants.


beautiful job.

bernie

FredFourth
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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#2 Post by FredFourth » 08 Jan 2016, 01:55

Dang Bernie, You are spoiling me.

But I like it. : )

Michael (MV)
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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#3 Post by Michael (MV) » 11 Jan 2024, 20:32

Hi Frank,

Please confirm in this thread that this is indeed the poem you messaged me about on 1/11/24 about deleting.

Thank you,

Michael (MV)

FranktheFrank
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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#4 Post by FranktheFrank » 11 Jan 2024, 21:51

Yes, Michael. Thank you.

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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#5 Post by Michael (MV) » 12 Jan 2024, 03:17

Thank you, Frank, for the confirmation.

Now, I will move forward with your request to delete that poem.

Congrats on your accomplishments,

Michael (MV)

FranktheFrank wrote:
11 Jan 2024, 21:51
Yes, Michael. Thank you.

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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#6 Post by FranktheFrank » 12 Jan 2024, 03:33

Thanks Michael, The Writer's Block, you Bernie, Billy and Bob have been great collaborators.
I would have added more to the list but it seems they have left.

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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#7 Post by Michael (MV) » 12 Jan 2024, 04:07

Bernie, Billy, and Bob

brothers in broetry

😎

Michael (MV)

BobBradshaw
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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#8 Post by BobBradshaw » 12 Jan 2024, 22:09

I hope Bernie is back among us!

Sorry, I seem to have missed your poem…

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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#9 Post by FranktheFrank » 13 Jan 2024, 01:35

Bob, it's an old one offered or rather submitted to Zines
I've taken it down because it is being published next week with Autumn Sky Daily Poetry
and in April with OpenArtsForum.com
They don't mind sharing honours.
I will repost once its out.

Bernie, alas, seems to have left this mortal sphere.

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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#10 Post by BobBradshaw » 13 Jan 2024, 01:42

Congrats on the acceptances.

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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#11 Post by FranktheFrank » 13 Jan 2024, 01:50

Thanks Bob, appreciate.

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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#12 Post by RamanathanSiva » 14 Jan 2024, 19:27

What does this mean?
Bernie, alas, seems to have left this mortal sphere.
Please explain
Siva

FranktheFrank
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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#13 Post by FranktheFrank » 14 Jan 2024, 23:23

Bernie01 » 07 Jan 2016, 22:41
Ieuan---
a glowing portrait all the more special because of the details....she refuses to make meals after a certain hour, that she is taller than the writer, the grand children and her murmurs as she tends the plants.
beautiful job.
bernie - 7th January 2016 at 22:41 hours

CalebMurdock
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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#14 Post by CalebMurdock » 16 Jan 2024, 09:01

Didn't I place a comment on this poem?

Oh yes, I did. Why do you sometimes create two threads for one poem, Frank?

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Re: In Love with a Woman in her Later Years

#15 Post by FranktheFrank » 16 Jan 2024, 12:10

It's gone for publication, Caleb.
I will repost when it's out in April.

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