Along the Winding Road removed for further work

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FredFourth
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Along the Winding Road removed for further work

#1 Post by FredFourth » 19 Dec 2015, 18:49

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Michael (MV)
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Re: Along the Winding Road

#2 Post by Michael (MV) » 04 Jan 2016, 23:15

 
I'm considering this poem; your opinions please on this poem to represent in the Jan. IBPC 2016

workshop suggestions

etc


Thanks

Michael (MV)

 
 
 
  
 
 

FredFourth
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Re: Along the Winding Road

#3 Post by FredFourth » 05 Jan 2016, 18:54

Thinking about it Michael, a bit terse in places, ending weak.

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Re: removed for further work

#4 Post by FredFourth » 06 Jan 2016, 22:18

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