Holding on to a Thread
Working and scheming, I walk
as if a spider in this web. Waiting
the best part and the worst. Stuck
mid-air to a notion I can't get
out of my head. Work hard and
it will come to you. Center your
thoughts, believe, they tell you.
And you wait. Seasons circle.
Loose ends need repair. A move
when circumstances prevail. Then
working and scheming, waiting
all over again. Night your savior.
The sticky thread's an art, a living,
a window of chance stretched
across the infinite realm of desire.
Holding on to a Thread
-
- Posts: 1168
- Joined: 14 May 2011, 20:30
Re: Holding on to a Thread
Billy
The sticky threads an art, a living,
The sticky thread's an art,a living
or
The sticky thread is an art,a living
The sticky threads an art, a living,
The sticky thread's an art,a living
or
The sticky thread is an art,a living
Re: Holding on to a Thread
Thanks Siva, missed that.
-
- Posts: 117
- Joined: 29 Oct 2015, 22:25
Re: Holding on to a Thread
The sticky thread's an art, a living,
There is no apostrophe in Sticky, it cannot mean: The sticky thread is an art if it is then you must use 'is', an apostrophe is not correct.
It must mean: The sticky thread, an art, a living.
In my opinion.
Siva, always a space after a comma.
There is no apostrophe in Sticky, it cannot mean: The sticky thread is an art if it is then you must use 'is', an apostrophe is not correct.
It must mean: The sticky thread, an art, a living.
In my opinion.
Siva, always a space after a comma.
Re: Holding on to a Thread
's can be the contraction for the sticky thread is. One can tell grammatically whether the 's is possessive or a contraction. It can also be the contraction has, ie, nobody's met him.