Spring Came Early

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Billy
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Spring Came Early

#1 Post by Billy » 30 Jan 2016, 01:30

Spring Came Early

While plum blossoms
weep in the wind
you walk over the mountain.

It accepts you fully.
Its heart is yours.
The snow at its peak

is the letter you left behind.
I look for you
through the clouds

a shadow
rising higher and higher.
I haven't eaten for two days.

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