Leaving the City

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Billy
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Leaving the City

#1 Post by Billy » 06 Feb 2016, 20:29

Leaving the City

Lying in bed I read Chinese poetry.
The sleepy moon in the window

barely keeps its eye open. Du Fu
is by a river, in a thatched hut,

growing vegetables to feed weary
guests. The river becomes the moon,

a rainbow, a heron taking flight.
It's all moving slowly but surely

into a poem that delights Du Fu
more than royal courts and city lights.

morkhenderson
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Re: Leaving the City

#2 Post by morkhenderson » 28 Feb 2016, 00:08

I really like this - thanks!

Michael (MV)
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Re: Leaving the City

#3 Post by Michael (MV) » 29 Feb 2016, 08:48

 
The last 3 lines like this poem itself


yes, leaving this city leaving this world


I want to glide down over Mulholland
I want to write her name in the sky
Gonna free fall out into nothin'
Gonna leave this world for a while
        -- Tom Petty – "Free Fallin'"   1989
 


8)

Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

SivaRamanathan
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Re: Leaving the City

#4 Post by SivaRamanathan » 29 Feb 2016, 09:30

Billy

I think this poem is complete. Works well.

Siva

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