Parabolic.

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Parabolic.

#1 Post by meenas17 » 26 May 2016, 21:13

Into the bones
heat penetrates
through

Through the skin
sweat percolates
as dew

Back and forth
movement is
proportionate.

Dehydration
initiates
invalidity.

A recovery
is seen
on the anvil.

Death stares
through
the hedge.
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