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Billy
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haiku

#1 Post by Billy » 13 Dec 2016, 06:14

living
in the Presence
(Present)

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Re: haiku

#2 Post by Bernie01 » 13 Dec 2016, 23:12

i enjoy the wit here, congrats on your vote for risk taking.


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#3 Post by Michael (MV) » 16 Dec 2016, 09:01

 
Hi Billy,


reminds me of the revelation I've observed in past years: present & pre-sent


in the future we arrive to the absolute present

we are pre-sent to that present


no tense
in Heaven
always of the present



living in the present
of the Presence:

I am with you always



8)

Michael (MV)


Billy wrote:living
in the Presence
(Present)
   
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Re: haiku

#4 Post by Billy » 17 Dec 2016, 22:01

Thanks Bernie and Michael.

I like the many meanings that can be derived from "present": now, being here, aware, a gift, time, space, not absent as when saying "present" in school when a child, and more.

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