haiku for Valentine's Day

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Billy · #1 Post by **Billy** » 15 Feb 2017, 06:07

Valentine's Day
a ghost
shows up

valentines--
i've got only one
to send

valentine--
a candy heart gone
before day's done

Michael (MV) · #2 Post by **Michael (MV)** » 15 Feb 2017, 07:51

Hi Billy,

the center one

the heart

valentines--
i only need
send one

Love of 2 is one

Michael (MV)

Billy · #3 Post by **Billy** » 15 Feb 2017, 08:01

Thanks Michael. I actually like the last one best. It has a much deeper meaning about Valentine's Day than its simple statement.

BobBradshaw · #4 Post by **BobBradshaw** » 16 Feb 2017, 21:49

Sweet!

Billy · #5 Post by **Billy** » 17 Feb 2017, 07:50

Michael, I like the ambiguity of:

I've got only one
To send

Thanks Bob

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