Sleep - Removed for Submissions

[FranktheFrank]

'If I don't attray Head, an apt title.

[Billy]

All I can say is: why don't we put all our own sins on display? I've lied, womanized, betrayed. I've got the same list. But a lot of people see the good I've done, too.

[BobBradshaw]

I like the poem....but the last two stanzas don't rachet up any emotion...and the irony is already established. I might end the poem on:

we’d bought into the suspension
of disbelief and he knew it.

[FranktheFrank]

Why not indeed.

[FranktheFrank]

Thanks Bob, valuable feedback.