Doing Something Worth The Nothing.

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meenas17
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Doing Something Worth The Nothing.

#1 Post by meenas17 » 20 Feb 2017, 07:02

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My friends ask
"What do you do all day?"
I smile.

It is been not once.
I want to ask them
"What do you want me to do?"

They continue with a curiosity,
"How do you spend time in a small town?"
I laugh.

It has been on several occasions.
I wish to question them
"Small or big, does it matter?"

They do not stop the interrogation.They go further.
"Why not you come out with your schedule?'
I burst out laughing.

If I reveal my itinerary, they would be shocked.
What is my time table? The first time, I think of it.
How to draw reliable programmes?

I google. I research. I seek help from software technology.
Nowhere, could I find my pursuit. I spend the whole week.
It strikes the chord. This is the way I spend time.

Doing something worth the nothing.




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My friends ask
"What do you do?"
I smile.

It is been not once.
I want to ask them
"What do you want me to do"?

They continue their questionnaire
"How do you spend time in a small town"?
I laugh.

It has been on several occasions.
I wish to question them
"Small or big, does it matter"?

They do not stop the interrogation.They go.
"Why not you come out with your schedule"?
I burst out laughing.

If I reveal my itinerary, they would be shocked.
What is my time table? The first time, I think of it.
How to draw reliable programmes?

I google. I research. I seek help from software technology.
Nowhere, could I find my pursuit. I spend the whole week.
It strikes the chord. This is the way I spend time.

Doing something worth the nothing.
meenas17

Michael (MV)
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Re: Doing Something Worth The Nothing.

#2 Post by Michael (MV) » 20 Feb 2017, 10:49

  
Hi meenas17,


"Doing Something Worth The Nothing" : "Sound & fury signifying nothing"


"Not all those who wander are lost"   - J. R. R. Tolkien .


I range I roam I read I write - an audiovore an artivore - therefore I am   8)  Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 
 

meenas17
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Re: Doing Something Worth The Nothing.

#3 Post by meenas17 » 21 Feb 2017, 03:33

Rightly defined, Michael.
Time and place have no significance in my life.

Wherever I am I m happy.
Whatever I do I am happy.

I am what I am.
Again, doing something worth the nothing.

Thanks for commenting.

Meena.
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FranktheFrank
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Location: Between the mountains and the sea

Re: Doing Something Worth The Nothing.

#4 Post by FranktheFrank » 28 Feb 2017, 15:48

Meena
You need to sort out the speech literals,
they must be the outside of question marks and periods and commas.

Thus: "I love to enclose my commas,"

meenas17
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Re: Doing Something Worth The Nothing.

#5 Post by meenas17 » 02 Mar 2017, 09:18

Thanks, Frank. I have sorted out the speech literals.

Meena.
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