Spring Equinox 2017  (a triptych)

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Michael (MV)
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Spring Equinox 2017  (a triptych)

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 21 Mar 2017, 05:51

 
Nothing gold can stay     - - Robert Frost 



brother of the moon & sister of the sun
an undivorced vow
keeping the view
20 / 20




"Put out the light, then put out the light”

a marriage beautiful for the bravery
Love is natural
Othello loving the light & Desdemona the black moor
nature is not natural
strawberry blonde & the sable stranger
nurture creates metaphor that can’t be made literal




the balance
already losing balance
(beautiful & damned)
from the beginning
there is no perfect web
compassion is not calibrated


http://www.bing.com/search?q=Salk+Insti ... 20_0700%22


 
 
 
  
 
 
 
  
 
 

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Re: Spring Equinox 2017  (a triptych)

#2 Post by Michael (MV) » 08 Apr 2017, 21:38

 
No response or other acceptance for the April IBPC;

so that WB will be represented at least by one, I'm sending in this one Sunday. unless I need to sooner.

Care to comment or workshop? Thanks.


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Michael (MV)
 
 
  
 
 
 

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Re: Spring Equinox 2017  (a triptych)

#3 Post by FranktheFrank » 08 Apr 2017, 22:24

I propose it and second it Michael, best wishes in the IBPC.

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Re: Spring Equinox 2017  (a triptych)

#4 Post by Michael (MV) » 09 Apr 2017, 01:39

 
Thanks, Frank,

perhaps you might also mention, please, the nom-nod @ Palaver in the thread Upcoming April IBPC 2017:

viewtopic.php?f=3&t=6521

Thanks,

Michael (MV)

FranktheFrank wrote:I propose it and second it Michael, best wishes in the IBPC.
 

 
 
 

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