Go Up The Himalayas

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Go Up The Himalayas

#1 Post by meenas17 » 26 Apr 2017, 13:22

I go up the Himalayas
reach the summit.

I view from the Everest 
the world below. 

The sky overhead is near
spreading a blue incandescence.

I hear no noise.
It is quiet. Damn close.

Fear shoves me forward.
I remain firm.

Sensing a vulnerability.
I masquerade.

I grapple. I stumble
I am suspended.

Exhilaration comes upon
It is a delirium.

Rising not of fever
being one of Gratification
meenas17

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