700 green stems
each with a round
white face the size
of a motionless
nickle surprised
by an unexpected
birthday party.
Posey Heaven
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Re: Posey Heaven
This poem grows on you. At first I didn't find any emotions, just a descriptive scene....now it's a sweet, kind poem that surprises me at the end with its unexpected birthday party.