An Undefined Joy

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meenas17
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An Undefined Joy

#1 Post by meenas17 » 19 Sep 2017, 17:53

The sparrows come back.
This day many in a row.

I try to count. One , two, I go,
but, they play truant.

Finally, find seven of them
picking and pecking my roses.

The seven little sisters chirp and yelp
Not once rhythmic.

The bustle continues
as they play game for an hour.

I join. Scatter grains on the lawn
The flock descends in haste.

I continue the sport. Place an earthern pot
with water. They sip and rejoice.

I watch them with tenderness.
Happiness is contagious, I skip and jump.

The integration is worthy.
Feel sad when they take wings.

The cacophomy
keeps me in a trance.

Off to bed joyous.
meenas17

Bernie01
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Re: An Undefined Joy

#2 Post by Bernie01 » 20 Sep 2017, 06:08

M---

i enjoyed the simplicity and smooth storytelling.


Finally, I find seven of them
picking and pecking my roses.

The seven little sisters chirp and yelp
Not once rhythmic.

ONE SPEAKS FRENCH,
BUT WITH A POOR ACCENT.

The bustle continues
as they play gameS for an hour.



AN IDEA FOR ANOTHER IN THIS SERIES....

ONE BIRD A REFUGEE FROM ROHIUNGY,
I FIND HIM A FAT YELLOW CORN KERNEL.




a little drama.



bernie


Life of Pi...movie music

https://video.search.yahoo.com/yhs/sear ... ction=view


Ang Lee

https://video.search.yahoo.com/yhs/sear ... ction=view

meenas17
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Re: An Undefined Joy

#3 Post by meenas17 » 20 Sep 2017, 12:50

Bernie,
The links are amazing. Life Of Pi, is a film , I have not seen.
The music is overflowing. The melody is unbelievable. it glides, flows and takes one along with the tune.
Marvellous.

Thanks,
meenas17

Kenneth2816
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Re: An Undefined Joy

#4 Post by Kenneth2816 » 20 Sep 2017, 13:56

Meenas, nicely done Good formatting. I've been told the best poems use the simplest language.

meenas17
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Re: An Undefined Joy

#5 Post by meenas17 » 20 Sep 2017, 15:03

Simple is beautiful, Kenneth.
Your encouraging words keep me going.
Thanks.
meenas17

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