Butterfly Effect (revisiion)

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Kenneth2816
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Butterfly Effect (revisiion)

#1 Post by Kenneth2816 » 24 Sep 2017, 19:49

A man with no watch
asks after the time from
one who does not know.

In Macau, a clock chimes.
The rattle of bone
dice sets off a deluge.

Even the continents no longer
touch beneath the waters.
Cartographer of distances:

Me at the far of the world
marking rifts with my pen,
fixing the azimuth of Pangaea.

Bernie01
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Re: Butterfly Effect Letter

#2 Post by Bernie01 » 25 Sep 2017, 02:22

Kenneth---

trust me. take a chance on the intelligence of your general reader.

you don't need the verses of prep.

this is gold. gold. sensitive, original, even sensuous.


that the scratch of my pen
would not impact your slumber.




bernie

Kenneth2816
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Re: Butterfly Effect Letter

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 » 25 Sep 2017, 02:55

Bernie

New territory fir me, I dont write this type of stuff. I'm probably a little over my head.

Kenneth2816
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Re: Butterfly Effect (revisiion)

#4 Post by Kenneth2816 » 25 Sep 2017, 11:14

Revised since your comment Bernie. I just didn't want to start a whole new post.

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