"Thankful (this is not a Hallmark verse)"
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"Thankful (this is not a Hallmark verse)"
You won't find the living looking among the dead -- Luke 24:5
Thankful
for all
the left-overs
in the grave yard
the remains
gobbled up
by the bear belly
of the earth
Never broken or stopped
alright from the start of the course
and already taking the cake
the Heart trumps
by-passing the headstone
the Nativity in the crèche is never a stranger
need is the call to Creativity
The Life-loving
anima exhumed
never lost breath
following the muse
out of this world
that's right
in UniSon
the song
rising without waves & wings
freed from the soundboard
with the re-lenghtless Light
that keeps the Beauty kindled
And then she looks me in the eye and says
"We're gonna last forever"
And man, you know I can't begin to doubt it
No, cause it just feels so good, and so free, and that's right! -- Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers "Here Comes My Girl"
Re: "Thankful (this is not a Hallmark verse)"
M---
wonderful words.
bernie
wonderful words.
bernie
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Re: "Thankful (this is not a Hallmark verse)"
Thanks bernie,
for visiting & commenting
I have revised - hopefully the additional lines evolve the poem
Michael (MV)
Bernie01 wrote:M---
wonderful words.
bernie
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Re: "Thankful (this is not a Hallmark verse)"
I think the amplification makes for a more cohesive poem.