Back on the dance floor at age 57.
Taffeta jacket lapels,
felt footwear of a Venetian gondolier.
Louche, insouciant past.
The mind, Atlas of forgotten dabs.
Bright Lights
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Re: Bright Lights
Bernie, I can relate, particularly with the last line.Nice word choices with tafetta, gondoliers,Louche, insousciant.
Who says you cant pur a lot in a minimalist poem
Who says you cant pur a lot in a minimalist poem
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Re: Bright Lights
I liked insouciant,
sets a nice tone to the pom.
sets a nice tone to the pom.
Re: Bright Lights
Frank---and Kenneth
needed to write down these scattered lines...i'm sure this has happened to you, once or twice. I've made a small edit...and I, too, like the words you underline.
bernie
needed to write down these scattered lines...i'm sure this has happened to you, once or twice. I've made a small edit...and I, too, like the words you underline.
bernie