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Michael (MV)
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erosangel

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 15 Feb 2018, 09:54

 
What I carry in my heart

[keeps us so close though so far apart]

Only love can make love
                               -- Peter Gabriel "That Voice Again" (1986)



2018
Valentine's
on hump day

once
every six years
2024

fortunately
Love like making music
plays forever

with no need for Viagra
keeping it up with The Light
that exhumes Life to ecstasy

a supernal ménage à trois
is not a try tangle
instead an InfinTrinity

created in Heaven
Christ Magdalene
& moi in-waiting for you
 

so strong & fleeting







 
  
 

 
 
 
  
 
 

Bernie01
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Joined: 30 Jul 2015, 11:14

Re: erosangel

#2 Post by Bernie01 » 17 Feb 2018, 21:43

M---


2018
Valentine's
on hump day

once
every six years
2024

a supernal ménage à trois

created in Heaven
Christ Magdalene
& moi in-waiting.

so strong & fleeting.






a sketch, a haiku. clearer now, i think.



the deep reasoning doesn't work for beans, for me. hence, a haiku feeling.

bernie

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