I like you, Mary Magdalene
I do not know if you are a
sinner or a saint
I only know you are human like me
and you have touched the Divine
I like you Mary Magdalene
though I will never say I am a sinner
or a saint, the soul in me
is pure, I am not the body
I am the soul-it is a different logic
altogether, whatever
I like you Mary Magdalene.
SINNER OR SAINT
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Re: SINNER OR SAINT
I like the narrator’s simple, hesitant voice.
Re: SINNER OR SAINT
S---
happy to see you experimenting with a new narrative style.
feels authentic, the evolving narrative is clear.
bernie
happy to see you experimenting with a new narrative style.
feels authentic, the evolving narrative is clear.
bernie
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Re: SINNER OR SAINT
Bob and Bernie
It was written long ago and published in Efflorescence-3--an in house anthology.I brought it back because Michael reminded me of Magdalene.
S
It was written long ago and published in Efflorescence-3--an in house anthology.I brought it back because Michael reminded me of Magdalene.
S
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