"Violin of Hope" (Holocaust Remembrance Day 2018)
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"Violin of Hope" (Holocaust Remembrance Day 2018)
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Re: "Violin of Hope" (Holocaust Remembrance Day 2018)
Hi Michael, I enjoy these types of poems, the focus on word placement and visual presentation. The spacing here is spot on. I’m not sure I understand W hite, is this a person?
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Re: "Violin of Hope" (Holocaust Remembrance Day 2018)
Thanks Dale
for taking a read & look at this visual poem (VisPo), and commenting
re " I’m not sure I understand W hite, is this a person?"
not a person; the color white
White noise sounds Joyful
Then it appeared to me in the shape of a cross - about that time The Violins of Hope visited my home-metro - and there I observed some shared semblance of shape between the violin & the cross -
*hopefully* the bow moving across the instrument will imaginatively enter the vision, then the subtleness of semblance will become pronounced an octave more
Michael (MV)
for taking a read & look at this visual poem (VisPo), and commenting
re " I’m not sure I understand W hite, is this a person?"
not a person; the color white
White noise sounds Joyful
Then it appeared to me in the shape of a cross - about that time The Violins of Hope visited my home-metro - and there I observed some shared semblance of shape between the violin & the cross -
*hopefully* the bow moving across the instrument will imaginatively enter the vision, then the subtleness of semblance will become pronounced an octave more
Michael (MV)