Bob I think we are cross-posting.
I liked V5 ending, but now it is gone
even as I tried to copy and paste.
Prefer 'faltering candle' very much.
Faltering says it all, trembling doesn't quite fit.
Think you should start a new thread, too complex to keep up now.
Present tense seems okay.
A Daguerreotype of Edgar Allan Poe, 1849 -- revised
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Re: A Daguerreotype of Edgar Allan Poe, 1849 -- revised
Hi Bob,
perhaps it would be a good idea to post in a new thread here in the workshop the latest incarnation of this Poe-poem with a parenthetical to indicate it as a June entry:
A Daguerreotype of Edgar Allan Poe, 1849 (the June edition)
I hope to read & workshop more this week on this poem,
as I hope a nom-nod for it,
of course, Bob, with your approval.
Thanks,
Michael (MV)
perhaps it would be a good idea to post in a new thread here in the workshop the latest incarnation of this Poe-poem with a parenthetical to indicate it as a June entry:
A Daguerreotype of Edgar Allan Poe, 1849 (the June edition)
I hope to read & workshop more this week on this poem,
as I hope a nom-nod for it,
of course, Bob, with your approval.
Thanks,
Michael (MV)