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FranktheFrank · #1 Post by **FranktheFrank** » 27 Jun 2018, 17:13

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Kenneth2816 · #2 Post by **Kenneth2816** » 27 Jun 2018, 21:27

Much more sophisticated. The casual reader may not know until the first quote who the poem is about, but the writing is independent of subject. It's good poetics. It's paced very well and the imagery is superior.

Kenneth2816 · #3 Post by **Kenneth2816** » 27 Jun 2018, 21:28

My nom for IBPC

FranktheFrank · #4 Post by **FranktheFrank** » 27 Jun 2018, 22:13

Thanks Ken
glad you like
I accept.

BobBradshaw · #5 Post by **BobBradshaw** » 28 Jun 2018, 04:38

I agree with Ken. Your hard work has paid off. You have developed your own style clearly here. It is well paced with nice images, as Ken noted. The ending is much better in this version. Well done

FranktheFrank · #6 Post by **FranktheFrank** » 28 Jun 2018, 10:29

Thank Bob
driven on by Bernie
and fellow poets
many thanks.

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