a photojournalism:

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Michael (MV)
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a photojournalism:

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 24 Jun 2018, 01:38

 
 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Life exhumed with the Light

  
                                  flat lines aren't finish lines                                                    

                                                                                                        buried alive in the body bag of a serpent's belly

Bernie01
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Re: a photojournalism:

#2 Post by Bernie01 » 24 Jun 2018, 03:59

M---

kill the last line---no connection to light and it's a poor man dylan thomas...



but the first two lines, now we got something going.


consider making a passing reference to antiquity...challenge yourself...write five more lines....


bernie

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