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a photojournalism:

Posted: 24 Jun 2018, 01:38
by Michael (MV)
 
 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Life exhumed with the Light

  
                                  flat lines aren't finish lines                                                    

                                                                                                        buried alive in the body bag of a serpent's belly

Re: a photojournalism:

Posted: 24 Jun 2018, 03:59
by Bernie01
M---

kill the last line---no connection to light and it's a poor man dylan thomas...



but the first two lines, now we got something going.


consider making a passing reference to antiquity...challenge yourself...write five more lines....


bernie