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Removed for publishing
Posted: 25 Jun 2018, 14:47
by FranktheFrank
Dylan Thomas poem
Re: Tribute in a Wooden Shed
Posted: 25 Jun 2018, 21:42
by Bernie01
Frank---
excellent.
A warmer and more balanced portrait.
now this shed, you don't make it come alive by telling us what poems may have been crafted there.
would avoid the word wanton at the end.
makes the poem sound parochial.
bernie
Re: Tribute in a Wooden Shed
Posted: 25 Jun 2018, 22:24
by FranktheFrank
Okay
shall try more
drop wanton
Thanks
Re: Removed for publishing
Posted: 19 Dec 2023, 15:23
by FranktheFrank
This Poem will be published in March 2024