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Dylan Thomas poem
Re: Tribute in a Wooden Shed
Frank---
excellent.
A warmer and more balanced portrait.
now this shed, you don't make it come alive by telling us what poems may have been crafted there.
would avoid the word wanton at the end.
makes the poem sound parochial.
bernie
excellent.
A warmer and more balanced portrait.
now this shed, you don't make it come alive by telling us what poems may have been crafted there.
would avoid the word wanton at the end.
makes the poem sound parochial.
bernie
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Re: Tribute in a Wooden Shed
Okay
shall try more
drop wanton
Thanks
shall try more
drop wanton
Thanks
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Re: Removed for publishing
This Poem will be published in March 2024