When I Find Myself

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Billy
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When I Find Myself

#1 Post by Billy » 16 Oct 2018, 03:32

When I Find Myself

Alone yet refusing to be alone.
What love has been everything it was supposed to be?
I linger in my own world for a little longer.

The rain comes and goes.
There is a quiet only found in a downpour.
Tomorrow I will talk to people.

I will be everything I'm supposed to be,
then come home exhausted
and spend the night listening to the rain.

BobBradshaw
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Re: When I Find Myself

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 16 Oct 2018, 04:24

It's a nice sigh....I really like that last stanza

The second line needs some smoothing out....

Kenneth2816
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Re: When I Find Myself

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 » 16 Oct 2018, 20:01

Relatable.

sarahemkhan45
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Re: When I Find Myself

#4 Post by sarahemkhan45 » 19 Oct 2018, 15:43

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IndianaDP
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Re: When I Find Myself

#5 Post by IndianaDP » 19 Oct 2018, 17:57

This describes me to a tee.

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