To be alone on a ship at sea
to look at sunrise and sunset
the fauna and flora of the sea
to sail fifty miles towards the land
and wish to go the same fifty
into the sea
the power of being captain
challenging nature
the sea receding,
the ship squatting on land
thirteen at a table with gin and tonic
at eighteen I played around
lost a finger to the pulley which I
ought not to have pulled
yet I thrust my nose forward,
to make good my nautical grades
now my love of the sea and ships
has made me a ship-builder.
A Former Captain Speaks His Love Story
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Re: A Former Captain Speaks His Love Story
Really nice flow and rhythm... especially liked
yet I thrust my nose forward,
to make good my nautical grades
yet I thrust my nose forward,
to make good my nautical grades
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Re: A Former Captain Speaks His Love Story
I wish I had been a sailor. I love ships and thus, can relate to this poem .
Re: A Former Captain Speaks His Love Story
A beautiful poem, Siva.
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