4 photojournalism (3-17-2019)

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Michael (MV)
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4 photojournalism (3-17-2019)

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 17 Mar 2019, 18:29

Sunrise over Emerald
every day Sunday
(& St. Paddy's)



Sunrise over a flock
of shamrocks
St. Patrick's Sunday



St. Patrick's sunrise
over a Sunday flock
of shamrocks



over a Sunday flock of shamrocks

Emerald sunrise

over fields of 3-leaf clovers
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BobBradshaw
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Re: 4 photojournalism (3-17-2019)

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 17 Mar 2019, 20:49

I like this... clever. The line that bothers me is “every day Sunday”.... I don’t know what that means
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Re: 4 photojournalism (3-17-2019)

#3 Post by Billy » 18 Mar 2019, 17:09

I really like that second one.
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