a micro-poem celebrating Virginia Ruth born 5/18/1929

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Michael (MV)
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a micro-poem celebrating Virginia Ruth born 5/18/1929

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 18 May 2019, 13:09

 
     

            How can son be ruthless
            Mother was given
            the middle name Ruth

 
 
 
 
 
 

meenas17
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Re: a micro-poem remembering Virginia Ruth born 5/18/1929

#2 Post by meenas17 » 18 May 2019, 13:39

That is wonderful.
Pun on Ruth.
meenas17

BobBradshaw
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Re: a micro-poem remembering Virginia Ruth born 5/18/1929

#3 Post by BobBradshaw » 18 May 2019, 20:14

I agree ...splendid

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