haiku
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Hi Billy,
Good examples of haiku
not sure, but maybe another word for "carrying" - one even more specific
Of course, I like the 2nd the best - my personal favorite
the joyful sound
As Keats says - "a thing of beauty is a joy forever"
Laughter is a vital sign of Life
Michael (MV)
Good examples of haiku
not sure, but maybe another word for "carrying" - one even more specific
Of course, I like the 2nd the best - my personal favorite
the joyful sound
As Keats says - "a thing of beauty is a joy forever"
Laughter is a vital sign of Life
Michael (MV)
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Billy, I read both poems.Can connect with the. 'temple in a field.'
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Hi Billy,
reading again this morning,
and sharing this variation that occurred to me:
his buzzing chasuble,
a temple -
beekeeper in the field
^^ and I see an impressionistic canvas
And to accompany your 2nd haiku,
in which this Sunday sunrise, I'm reading "above the clouds" as "on earth as it is in Heaven"
mother
i hear your laughter
above the clouds
https://youtu.be/Yi52HjJbwVQ
Her joy continues
to rhythm & rhyme
with her boy
in UniSon
Michael (MV)
reading again this morning,
and sharing this variation that occurred to me:
his buzzing chasuble,
a temple -
beekeeper in the field
^^ and I see an impressionistic canvas
And to accompany your 2nd haiku,
in which this Sunday sunrise, I'm reading "above the clouds" as "on earth as it is in Heaven"
mother
i hear your laughter
above the clouds
https://youtu.be/Yi52HjJbwVQ
Her joy continues
to rhythm & rhyme
with her boy
in UniSon
Michael (MV)
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Re: haiku
Like the first one best Billy. Good ecanple
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Re: haiku
Honestly, I will have to look it up.
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Re: haiku
Billy, you know I am hopeless on these haikus
but they seem to like it.
but they seem to like it.